Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is usually sunny, which I really enjoy because it makes me feel more energetic and cheerful.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because the sunshine gives me energy and helps me feel relaxed and comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Make sure to express your ideas clearly and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to explain your preferences.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside, but sometimes wet weather feels more refreshing and comfortable for my body.

Sugestão: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, you could add linking words to enhance coherence and use a wider range of vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for school because it helps me plan my day effectively, such as deciding what to wear or whether to bring an umbrella.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks specific details. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide clear examples or explanations to support your points.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent extreme weather events, such as floods and heatwaves, which have seriously affected both the environment and people's lives.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structures to express your ideas clearly. Provide reasons and examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing various weather conditions can enrich my travel experiences and help me learn more about different cultures.

× The place that I leave the weather is sunny day and I really like the sunny day because when I see the sun I will feel more energetic.

✓ The place where I live has sunny weather, and I really like sunny days because when I see the sun, I feel more energetic.

The original sentence has sentence structure issues and incorrect word usage ('leave' instead of 'live', 'sunny day' instead of 'sunny days'). The sentence is also a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The place that I leave the weather is sunny day and I really like the sunny day because when I see the sun I will feel more energetic.

✓ The place where I live has sunny weather, and I really like sunny days because when I see the sun, I feel more energetic.

The preposition 'that' is incorrectly used; 'where' is appropriate to indicate location. Also, 'leave' is a wrong verb; 'live' is correct.

× The place that I leave the weather is sunny day and I really like the sunny day because when I see the sun I will feel more energetic.

✓ The place where I live has sunny weather, and I really like sunny days because when I see the sun, I feel more energetic.

The phrase 'sunny day' should be plural 'sunny days' to refer generally to multiple days with sun, matching the context.

× The place that I leave the weather is sunny day and I really like the sunny day because when I see the sun I will feel more energetic.

✓ The place where I live has sunny weather, and I really like sunny days because when I see the sun, I feel more energetic.

Using 'I will feel' is unnecessary here; the present tense 'I feel' is more appropriate to express a habitual or general truth.

× I prefer hot weather because I think also the weather is hot. I like the sunshine and it will give me energy and let me feel very chill and. And.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I like the sunshine; it gives me energy and makes me feel very relaxed.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incomplete thoughts ('and. And.'). Also, 'very chill' is informal and awkward; 'very relaxed' is clearer and more appropriate.

× I prefer hot weather because I think also the weather is hot. I like the sunshine and it will give me energy and let me feel very chill and. And.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I like the sunshine; it gives me energy and makes me feel very relaxed.

The conjunction 'and' is overused and misused, leading to sentence fragments. Proper punctuation and conjunction use improve sentence flow.

× I prefer dry weather but I think my personal body more like wet weather because wet weather will let me feel more comfortable and dry weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather, but I think my body prefers wet weather because wet weather makes me feel more comfortable than dry weather.

The phrase 'my personal body more like' is incorrect; 'my body prefers' is correct. Also, comparison between 'wet weather' and 'dry weather' needs clearer structure.

× I prefer dry weather but I think my personal body more like wet weather because wet weather will let me feel more comfortable and dry weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather, but I think my body prefers wet weather because wet weather makes me feel more comfortable than dry weather.

'My personal body' is an incorrect pronoun phrase; 'my body' is appropriate. Also, the sentence lacks clarity in comparing feelings about weather types.

× I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for study. I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving to study. I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

The phrase 'before leaving for study' is awkward; 'before leaving to study' is more natural. The rest of the sentence is correct in present tense.

× In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and superb weather events such as floods, which.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and severe weather events such as floods.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'which.' Also, 'superb' is an incorrect adjective here; 'severe' or 'extreme' is appropriate to describe negative weather events.

× Yes, I I like because I think different climb will increase the difference evolution and experience for daily trip. So I think it's.

✓ Yes, I like it because I think different climates will increase diverse experiences and learning during daily trips. So I think it's beneficial.

The original sentence is fragmented, contains repetition ('I I'), and uses incorrect words ('climb' instead of 'climate', 'difference evolution' is unclear). The correction clarifies meaning and improves grammar.