Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details about each season using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: The weather where I live varies throughout the year. For example, winters are usually gloomy, while the rainy season is mostly cloudy. In contrast, summers are bright and sunny, which I really enjoy.

Sugestão: Avoid excessive hesitation and repetition. Provide a clear preference with supporting reasons using linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it offers many benefits. For instance, it allows me to have more vacations and spend quality time with my family, which I really appreciate.

Sugestão: Focus on giving a direct answer first, then explain your reasons clearly without unnecessary questions or hesitation. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because it helps me stay healthy and fit. Moreover, I find it refreshing and enjoyable compared to dry weather.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Provide specific details about when and how often you check the forecast, using linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: I rarely check the weather forecast because I prefer outdoor activities. However, I occasionally check it before planning important events to avoid bad weather.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Provide more specific examples and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: I believe climate change has caused several serious issues recently. For example, it has led to loss of biodiversity and increased pollution levels, which affect our environment negatively.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitation and improve grammar. Provide a clear reason for your interest in visiting different climates, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Of course, I enjoy visiting cities with different climates from my hometown. This allows me to experience new environments and adapt to various weather conditions, which I find exciting.

× the weather where I, I live like, uh, a different on depends on the situation

✓ the weather where I live is different depending on the situation

The phrase 'a different on depends on' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'is different depending on' to indicate variation based on conditions.

× in the winter season, it looks like a gloomy

✓ in the winter season, it looks gloomy

The word 'gloomy' is an adjective and does not need the article 'a' before it when describing weather. Also, 'looks like a gloomy' is incomplete; 'looks gloomy' is correct.

× in the rainy season, it looks like a cloudy

✓ in the rainy season, it looks cloudy

Similar to the previous sentence, 'cloudy' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct phrase is 'looks cloudy'.

× in the summer season, it looks so sunny

✓ in the summer season, it looks very sunny

The adverb 'so' is informal and less precise here; 'very' is more appropriate to describe intensity in this context.

× it gives a lots of vacation

✓ it gives a lot of vacation

The phrase 'a lots of' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'a lot of' when referring to an uncountable noun like 'vacation'.

× gives a lot of quality time to spend with my family members

✓ gives a lot of quality time for spending with my family members

The preposition 'to' is less appropriate here; 'for spending' better expresses purpose.

× Is it more convenient, uh, than, uh, dry weather?

✓ Is it more convenient than dry weather?

The sentence is a question but lacks proper structure; removing filler words and clarifying the question improves clarity.

× Actually, hardly ever I checked the weather

✓ Actually, I hardly ever check the weather

The phrase 'hardly ever I checked' is incorrect word order and tense. The present tense 'check' fits better for habitual action, and the subject should precede the adverb.

× I enjoyed several outdoor activities, which I found more intriguing

✓ I enjoy several outdoor activities, which I find more intriguing

The present tense 'enjoy' and 'find' are appropriate to express current preferences rather than past actions.

× So occasionally I I use, uh, used to check, uh, whether for forecast

✓ So occasionally I use to check the weather forecast

The phrase 'use, uh, used to check' is confusing and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'I use to check' or better 'I sometimes check the weather forecast'.

× climate change affects us as several serious concern in recent years

✓ climate change affects us as a serious concern in recent years

The phrase 'several serious concern' is incorrect; 'concern' is singular and should be preceded by 'a'.

× loss of biodiversity as well as raising pollution level

✓ loss of biodiversity as well as rising pollution levels

'Raising' should be 'rising' to describe an increase, and 'pollution level' should be plural 'levels' to match context.

× different cities where the weather are different from my hometown

✓ different cities where the weather is different from my hometown

The subject 'weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'.

× I wanna cope up with it and enjoy to survive, survive it there

✓ I want to cope with it and enjoy living there

The phrase 'cope up with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cope with'. Also, 'enjoy to survive' is incorrect; 'enjoy living' is appropriate.