Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid filler words and organize your response logically by mentioning the seasons you experience in order. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I live in a place that experiences all four seasons. For example, summers are hot, winters are cold, and we also have rainy and spring seasons throughout the year.

Sugestão: Focus on giving a clear preference and support it with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities like picnics, swimming, and barbecues. Also, I like wearing light and comfortable clothes during summer.

Sugestão: Clarify your preference clearly and avoid contradicting statements. Use linking words to explain reasons logically. Try to avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is safer and more convenient to go outside. Wet weather can be slippery and requires carrying raincoats or umbrellas, which I find inconvenient.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly about your habit. Use complete sentences and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain why and how often you check the forecast.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning to prepare for the day. For instance, I decide whether to bring a raincoat, umbrella, or jacket depending on the weather.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and complete answer with specific examples. Use linking words to organize your points logically. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. For example, extreme weather events like hurricanes and floods have caused significant damage to communities worldwide. Additionally, rising temperatures have affected ecosystems.

Sugestão: Express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I would not like to visit cities with different climates because I prefer the climate where I live due to my health issues. Also, I am not someone who enjoys traveling frequently or packing often.

× I experienced all Four Seasons

✓ I have experienced all four seasons

The phrase 'all Four Seasons' should be in lowercase and plural as 'all four seasons'. Also, the present perfect tense 'have experienced' is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now.

× experienced summer hot and uh, rainy season and also, umm, experience winter

✓ experienced hot summers, the rainy season, and also winter

The word 'summer' should be pluralized to 'summers' to match the plural form of seasons. Also, 'rainy season' is singular and correct, but needs an article 'the'. Consistency in tense is important; 'experienced' should be used for all.

× I said for hot weathers

✓ I said I prefer hot weather

The word 'weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and should be corrected for clarity.

× because of we are going outside for picnic and, uh, swimming and also, uh, doing BBQ outside

✓ because we go outside for picnics, swimming, and also doing BBQ outside

The phrase 'because of we are going' is incorrect; 'because we are going' or 'because we go' is correct. Also, 'picnic' should be pluralized to 'picnics' to match the context.

× put a prefer, like, uh, put uh, comfortable clothes, light clothes because I wear, I did not like to wear

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, light clothes because I do not like to wear heavy clothes

The phrase 'put a prefer' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb usage. 'I did not like to wear' should be 'I do not like to wear' to match present tense preference.

× I prefer dry weather is good for me because I like wet weather

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is good for me; I do not like wet weather

The sentence contradicts itself by saying 'I prefer dry weather' and 'I like wet weather'. Also, 'dry weather is good for me' needs to be connected properly. The sentence should be clear and consistent.

× in dry weather we are going outside anywhere and uh, it's also safe

✓ in dry weather, we can go outside anywhere and it is also safe

The phrase 'we are going outside anywhere' is awkward; 'we can go outside anywhere' is more natural. Also, 'it's' should be expanded to 'it is' for clarity.

× it's for wet weather, Uh, it's like a slippery all over and uh, rainy and uh, you should need a JK raincoat

✓ wet weather is slippery everywhere and rainy, so you need a raincoat

The phrase 'it's for wet weather' is unclear. 'It's like a slippery all over' is incorrect; 'slippery everywhere' is better. 'You should need a JK raincoat' is incorrect; 'you need a raincoat' is clearer and more natural.

× I prefer unchecked weather every day in morning

✓ I prefer to check the weather every morning

The phrase 'unchecked weather' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'check the weather'. Also, 'in morning' should be 'every morning'.

× so I prepare for a day, umm, and like, umm, what should I need for a, a day? Like a raincoat or umbrella or a jacket for if, uh, some, uh, rainy and also, uh, set

✓ so I prepare for the day and think about what I need, like a raincoat, umbrella, or jacket if it is rainy

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'What should I need for a day?' is incorrect; it should be 'what I need for the day'. The phrase 'or jacket for if some rainy' is incorrect and needs restructuring.

× A recent year climate change profound effect on environment and human life

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and human life

The sentence lacks a verb and proper tense. 'A recent year' should be 'In recent years'. 'Climate change profound effect' needs the verb 'has had' to be grammatically correct.

× Firstly, I witnessed where weather events such as hurricane, floods and uh, rain

✓ Firstly, I have witnessed severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and heavy rain

The phrase 'where weather events' is incorrect; it should be 'severe weather events'. 'Hurricane' should be pluralized to 'hurricanes' to match the list. 'Rain' should be specified as 'heavy rain' for clarity.

× So it damaged the community worldwide, uh, additionally rising

✓ These events have damaged communities worldwide; additionally, rising temperatures are a concern

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'So it damaged the community worldwide' should be plural 'communities' and connected properly. 'Additionally rising' is incomplete and needs clarification.

× No, I wouldn't, I would definitely say no because I like where I live

✓ No, I wouldn't; I would definitely say no because I like where I live

The sentence is correct but needs a semicolon or period to separate the two independent clauses for clarity.

× I like the climate because I have a health issue

✓ I like the climate because of a health issue

The phrase 'because I have a health issue' is correct but can be more naturally expressed as 'because of a health issue' to explain the reason for liking the climate.

× So, uh, so I cannot go, uh, more cooler weather and umm, I'm not a that person who are packing and uh, doing so much

✓ So, I cannot go to cooler places, and I am not the kind of person who likes packing and doing too much

The phrase 'more cooler' is incorrect; 'cooler' alone is sufficient. 'Who are packing' should be 'who likes packing' to agree with singular subject. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.