Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct numerical information; finish your sentence and avoid awkward phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct the temperature number and unit and avoid trailing fragments.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is hot for most of the summer. However, during the monsoon and winter months the temperature drops and becomes much more comfortable, often falling to about 20–25°C. This cooler period brings relief from the intense heat and makes outdoor activities easier.

Sugestão: Good clear preference, but the response is a bit long and repetitive. Use a concise topic sentence, then one specific reason with a linking phrase. Replace vague words like "mid temperature" with "mild" and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer mild weather like in spring because it is comfortable for outdoor activities. For example, I can go for walks or dress casually without worrying about extreme heat or cold.

Sugestão: Finish the answer and give a clear choice. State your preference in one sentence, then support it with one specific reason using a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like "skin loose moisture" — say "dry skin" or "dehydrated skin."

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather to heavy rain because humidity makes travel difficult and uncomfortable. However, I try to avoid very dry conditions too, since they can cause dry skin and irritation.

Sugestão: Strong, natural answer with good detail and example. To improve further, make the timing/frequency explicit (e.g., daily or before leaving) and shorten slightly to avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning and especially before I go out during the rainy season. This helps me decide whether to take an umbrella or change my plans if heavy rain is expected.

Sugestão: Be more specific and give one or two clear effects with reasons or examples. Use linking words to show cause and effect, and avoid repeating words like "recently."

Exemplo: I think climate change has increased extreme weather events, such as unexpected heavy rains and storms, which cause flooding and damage to crops. As a result, farming and local infrastructure are under greater strain.

Sugestão: Good clear answer with a concrete example. To improve, add one brief reason why you want to visit the different climate and use a linking phrase to connect the example to your motivation.

Exemplo: Definitely. I want to visit Meghalaya because its rainy, cooler climate is very different from hot, arid Gujarat, and I would enjoy seeing the lush landscapes and experiencing a cooler environment.

× ...the temperature almost drops to 2025° to be precise.

✓ ...the temperature almost drops to 20-25°C, to be precise.

The original phrase '2025°' is unclear and missing necessary punctuation and unit; it appears to attempt a range. Use a hyphen for ranges and include the unit (Celsius). Also add a comma before 'to be precise' for clarity.

× Although I do believe that winters are not as.

✓ Although I do believe that winters are not as cold here.

The sentence is incomplete ('not as' requires a comparison object). Complete the thought by adding what winters are 'not as' (for example, 'cold here').

× Honestly I like the mid temperature around the springtime where it is comfortable enough to go outside and just play or wear the clothes that we prefer because during extreme winter and extreme summer the outside climate becomes very uneasy and inconvenient.

✓ Honestly, I like mild temperatures around springtime when it is comfortable enough to go outside and play or wear the clothes we prefer, because during extreme winter and extreme summer the weather becomes very uncomfortable and inconvenient.

Use 'mild temperatures' instead of 'mid temperature' and 'when' instead of 'where' to refer to time. 'Play' does not need 'just' and 'weather' is more natural than 'outside climate'. 'Very uneasy' is incorrect collocation; use 'very uncomfortable'. Also add punctuation for readability.

× Honestly, I don't enjoy rainy seasons at all because the temperature becomes very humid and it is usually inconvenient for people to travel or work outdoors.

✓ Honestly, I don't enjoy the rainy season at all because it becomes very humid and it is usually inconvenient for people to travel or work outdoors.

Use singular 'the rainy season' when referring to the season in general. 'The temperature becomes very humid' is awkward because humidity describes air, not temperature; saying 'it becomes very humid' is clearer.

× However, extremely dry weather can make your skin loose moisture which results in itchiness, so I prefer a.

✓ However, extremely dry weather can cause your skin to lose moisture, which results in itchiness, so I prefer a drier-but-not-too-dry climate.

'Loose' is incorrect; use 'lose' (verb). The sentence is incomplete after 'so I prefer a.' Complete with a clear preference. Add commas and rephrase for clarity.

× Absolutely, especially during the rainy season when I know that the weather is prone to rainfall, I make sure that before I leave my house, I look at the weather forecast app.

✓ Absolutely, especially during the rainy season when I know the weather is likely to bring rain, I make sure to check the weather forecast app before I leave the house.

Use 'likely to bring rain' or 'prone to rainfall' is awkward; 'check' is more natural than 'look at'. Place infinitive 'to check' after 'make sure' and streamline word order.

× For example, when I know it is about to rain or there are chances of rain, I can carry an umbrella.

✓ For example, when I know it is about to rain or there is a chance of rain, I can carry an umbrella.

Use 'there is a chance of rain' (singular) rather than 'there are chances of rain'. Maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Recently, the unexpected showers have taken a drastic change.

✓ Recently, unexpected showers have increased dramatically.

'Have taken a drastic change' is awkward and unidiomatic. Use 'have increased dramatically' to express a rise in unexpected showers. 'Recently' with present perfect is acceptable.

× That is because recently the areas have become prone to weather storms which were unlikely before.

✓ This is because, recently, some areas have become prone to severe storms that were unlikely before.

Use 'this' rather than 'that' to refer to the previous statement in speech. 'Weather storms' is redundant; 'severe storms' is better. Add commas and 'some areas' for clarity, and use 'that' to introduce the relative clause.

× Definitely, I would like to visit a state that has a different climate for us.

✓ Definitely, I would like to visit a state that has a different climate from where we live.

'For us' is awkward here; use 'from where we live' or 'from ours' to compare climates. This makes the comparison clear.

× For example, Gujarat is quite hot and arid, so I would like to visit Meghalaya where there is plenty of rainfall and the temperatures are a bit low.

✓ For example, Gujarat is quite hot and arid, so I would like to visit Meghalaya, where there is plenty of rainfall and the temperatures are rather low.

'A bit low' is informal; 'rather low' or 'relatively low' is more natural in this context. Add a comma before the relative clause for clarity.