Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary and word order (e.g., 'freezing' not 'freeze'), avoid redundant adverbs ('sometimes usually'), and give one short supporting detail. Use a linking word if adding detail.

Exemplo: Right now it's cloudy and a bit freezing. I usually wear a coat to keep warm when I go outside because the wind makes it feel colder.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first and follow with two clear, specific reasons. Use accurate collocations (e.g., 'relax in a café' not 'make relaxations in my cafe centre') and avoid hedging words like 'probably' when unnecessary.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can spend more time playing outdoors with my friends. Also, warm weather lets me relax in a café and enjoy sitting outside.

Sugestão: Answer directly and complete the thought. Avoid fillers ('so', 'you know') and unclear phrases ('adds some vibe'). Give a specific reason or example and use correct noun forms ('wet weather' without 'a').

Exemplo: I usually prefer wet weather because rainy days feel cozy and calm. For example, I like listening to rain while I read or drink tea at home.

Sugestão: Answer clearly about frequency and purpose. Use correct expressions ('I've recently developed a habit' or 'I check the forecast regularly'), state when you check it, and give a concise reason. Avoid vague phrasing ('important kit and follow the rules').

Exemplo: Yes, I've recently developed a habit of checking the forecast. I usually check it each morning and before I leave the house so I can dress appropriately and stay comfortable outdoors.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming one or two effects, then explain with specific examples (e.g., extreme weather, rising sea levels, health impacts). Avoid vague phrases like 'global cleaning' or 'dive deeper into it'. Use linking words to organise ideas.

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather like stronger storms and heatwaves. This affects people's health and damages agriculture, for example causing floods that destroy crops and homes.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give two clear, specific reasons. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use correct collocations ('experience new cultures', 'discover different landscapes') and organise with linking words ('for example', 'also').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I can experience new cultures and ways of life. For example, visiting a snowy city would let me try winter sports, and a tropical city would show me different food and landscapes.

× Well right now it's cloudy and a bit freeze so I sometimes usually wear coat to warm myself up.

✓ Well, right now it's cloudy and a bit freezing, so I sometimes/usually wear a coat to warm myself up.

The adjective 'freeze' is incorrect; the correct present participle adjective is 'freezing' to describe weather. 'Sometimes usually' is redundant; choose one adverb ('sometimes' or 'usually'). 'Wear coat' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun. Suggestion: use one frequency adverb, 'freezing' for temperature description, and include articles with singular nouns.

× I prefer more probably hot weather because it allows me to spend more time just playing with my friends and make relaxations in my cafe centre.

✓ I probably prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time playing with my friends and relaxing in my café centre.

'I prefer more probably' has awkward adverb order; place 'probably' before the verb. 'Make relaxations' is incorrect: use the gerund 'relaxing' to show activity. Also remove unnecessary 'just'. Keep parallel structure: 'spend time playing... and relaxing...'.

× So I usually prefer probably like a wet weather because it just, you know, adds some vibe and atmosphere also just allowing you to.

✓ So I usually prefer wet weather because it adds some vibe and atmosphere and allows you to enjoy it.

'A wet weather' is wrong because 'weather' is an uncountable noun here and does not take 'a'. Remove filler phrases 'probably like' and 'you know' for clarity. 'Also just allowing you to.' is a sentence fragment; change to a full clause 'and allows you to enjoy it.' Use simple present 'adds' for general statements.

× So I recently met a habit of checking the weather forecast to warm myself up and probably just feel comfortably while going outside, which is the important kit and follow the rules.

✓ I recently developed the habit of checking the weather forecast to warm myself up and feel comfortable when going outside; it is an important practice for following safety rules.

'Met a habit' is incorrect collocation; use 'developed the habit' or 'got into the habit'. 'Feel comfortably' uses adverb instead of adjective; use 'feel comfortable'. The clause 'which is the important kit and follow the rules' is ungrammatical and unclear; rephrase to 'it is an important practice for following safety rules.' Ensure logical sentence structure and correct word choice.

× So basically I think that one of the main problem of today's nature is pollution, which reflects on today's perspective and it's global cleaning, making us dive deeper into it.

✓ Basically I think that one of the main problems affecting nature today is pollution, which has global consequences and is making the situation worse.

'One of the main problem' must be 'one of the main problems' (plural) because 'one of' requires a plural noun. 'Today's nature' is awkward; use 'nature today' or 'the natural environment'. 'It's global cleaning' is unclear; replace with 'has global consequences' and 'making us dive deeper into it' is vague—rephrase to 'is making the situation worse.'

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because it will allow me to probably dive deeper into something where cultures and probably open up for myself, uh, something in new ones that I have never seen before, uh, which will be a good approach to just experience.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit cities with climates different from where I live because it would allow me to learn more about other cultures and experience places I have never seen before.

The original sentence is repetitive, contains fillers ('uh', 'probably') and ungrammatical phrases ('dive deeper into something where cultures', 'open up for myself'). Simplify and clarify: use 'cities with climates different from where I live', 'learn more about other cultures', and 'experience places I have never seen before.' Use 'would' to express hypothetical desire and maintain parallel, concise structure.