Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and accurate: correct factual mistakes (e.g. 'seven' should be 'summer'), avoid hesitations and unclear place names, and give a concise structured answer (topic sentence + 1–2 specific details). Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep responses under five sentences.

Exemplo: We mainly have two seasons: winter and summer. I prefer winter because the cool, pleasant weather encourages people to go out and buy new clothes. For example, my family likes visiting Cox's Bazar in winter to enjoy the beach without the heat.

Sugestão: Answer directly with one clear reason and one specific supporting example. Eliminate repetitions and filler words. Use a linking phrase (for example, because/so) and maintain natural vocabulary (e.g. 'wearing warm clothes').

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable for outdoor activities. For example, I enjoy walking in the park and wearing warm coats while exploring new places in winter.

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. State the preference in one sentence, then give a clear, specific reason and a short example. Remove fillers and correct collocations (e.g. 'stay dry', 'worry about getting wet').

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for outdoor activities and my clothes stay dry. For example, I can go running or do errands without worrying about getting wet.

Sugestão: Good direct answer and specific routine. Improve small grammar and word choice errors ('an umbrella', 'dress appropriately'). Keep it concise and natural; one linking phrase is enough (for example).

Exemplo: Yes, I always check the weather forecast before going out so I can dress appropriately and plan my day. For example, I check the forecast every morning on my phone to decide whether I need an umbrella or a warm coat.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then two specific, well-formed supporting points. Avoid grammar errors and vagueness (e.g. 'heat waves', 'storms', 'coastal communities'). Use linking words (for example, as a result) to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: I think climate change has had serious impacts in recent years. For example, we are seeing more frequent heat waves and extreme storms, and as a result glaciers are melting and sea levels are rising, which threatens coastal communities.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct vocabulary and place-name errors ('scenery', 'destinations', 'winter experience'), and give one specific example of a city or activity. Use linking words to connect preference and reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially those with cold winters. For example, I would love to visit Sapporo in Japan to enjoy snowy landscapes and winter festivals.

× In my country, we mainly have two seasons, winter and seven.

✓ In my country, we mainly have two seasons, winter and summer.

The student used 'seven' instead of the plural noun 'summer'; this is likely a pronunciation or word-choice error. Replace with 'summer' to list the two seasons correctly.

× I especially Cox Bazaar and uh, Pandora is very enjoyable.

✓ I especially enjoy Cox's Bazar and Pundra; they are very enjoyable.

The original sentence has improper names and sentence structure. 'I especially enjoy' fits the subject and verb pattern. Proper nouns must be corrected (Cox's Bazar and Pundra or similar), and use a plural or compound clause 'they are' to agree with the two places.

× I also like buying and warming, uh, wiring warm clothes in the winter and visit new place when the weather is pleasant.

✓ I also like buying and wearing warm clothes in the winter and visiting new places when the weather is pleasant.

Multiple errors: 'warming' and 'wiring' are incorrect forms; use the gerund 'wearing' after 'like' and 'visiting' to maintain parallel gerund structure. Use plural 'places' after 'new'.

× Uh, especially, especially is very enjoyable. That's it.

✓ Especially, I find that very enjoyable.

The repetition 'especially, especially' is redundant and the original lacks a clear subject and verb. Rephrase to a single, complete clause.

× Uh, I prefer dry weather because I feel more comfort, comfortable when I'm, uh, outdoors.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I feel more comfortable when I'm outdoors.

The student wrote both 'comfort' (noun) and 'comfortable' (adjective). Only the adjective 'comfortable' fits after 'feel'. Remove the extra word and fillers.

× It's easier to work around my clothes, uh, Moreover, shows uh, stay dry.

✓ It's easier to manage my clothes; moreover, they stay dry.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Manage my clothes' is clearer than 'work around my clothes', and 'they stay dry' provides a clear subject for 'stay dry'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences and the linking adverb 'moreover' correctly.

× For example, I enjoying doing a work or running around with worrying about getting wet or Moody.

✓ For example, I enjoy doing work or running around without worrying about getting wet or muddy.

Use the base verb 'enjoy' not 'enjoying' after 'I'. Use 'without worrying' for the negative idea. 'Moody' is incorrect; likely 'muddy' is intended. Remove extraneous articles ('a work' -> 'work').

× Yeah, definitely always check weather forecast before I go outside because I want to dress up appropriately and plan my day.

✓ Yeah, I definitely always check the weather forecast before I go outside because I want to dress appropriately and plan my day.

Missing article 'the' before 'weather forecast'. Also add subject 'I' after 'Yeah,' for clarity and use 'dress' (not 'dress up') if ordinary dressing is intended.

× For example, I usually look at the forecast every morning on my phone to see if I need a umbrella or a warm coat.

✓ For example, I usually look at the forecast every morning on my phone to see if I need an umbrella or a warm coat.

Use the correct indefinite article 'an' before words starting with a vowel sound like 'umbrella'.

× Yeah, I think climate change has already had serious effect on recent years,

✓ Yeah, I think climate change has already had serious effects in recent years,

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' when referring to multiple consequences. Use the preposition 'in' with 'recent years' for correct time expression.

× For example, when I have seen more frequent extreme weather events such as hot waves and heavy storm and rising temperature are causing glaciers to melt and sea levels to rise, which affect coastal communicate and.

✓ For example, we have seen more frequent extreme weather events such as heat waves and heavy storms, and rising temperatures are causing glaciers to melt and sea levels to rise, which affect coastal communities.

Multiple issues: use present perfect 'we have seen' not 'I have seen' to describe a general trend, correct nouns ('heat waves', 'storms', 'temperatures', 'communities'), ensure subject-verb agreement 'temperatures are causing', and complete the clause. Use plural nouns for countable items.

× I would like to visit cities with different climate, especially places with cold winter weather.

✓ I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially places with cold winter weather.

Use plural 'climates' when referring to multiple kinds of climate. 'Different climates' agrees with 'cities'.

× I enjoy the cool temperature and Sonos scenery, so when I travel I prefer directions that offer a true winter expressions experience.

✓ I enjoy the cool temperatures and scenic views, so when I travel I prefer destinations that offer a true winter experience.

Replace unclear/misspelled words: 'Sonos' -> 'scenic', 'directions' -> 'destinations', 'expressions experience' -> 'experience'. Use plural 'temperatures' to match general preference and correct noun forms.