Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Упростите и уточните ответ: начните с прямого предложения о погоде, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей. Уберите лишние фразы и ошибки (напр., «another country» неверно). Используйте связки для плавности.

Exemplo: I live in Saint Petersburg, Russia. The weather is often gloomy and rainy, with long periods of cloudy skies and little sunshine, especially in autumn and winter.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте короче и корректнее: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 причины. Избегайте лишних оборотов (например, «I feel myself» → «I feel»).

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it makes me feel more energetic and motivated. In cold weather I often get tired quickly because I need extra energy to stay warm.

Sugestão: Устраните повторения и неуверённые паузы. Дайте ясное утверждение и одну конкретную причину с корректной формой слова («moisture» → «moist»).

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather, especially right after rain, because the air feels fresher and more humid, and I find it easier to breathe outdoors.

Sugestão: Говорите более сжато и грамотно: начните с частоты, затем добавьте цель. Избегайте разговорных «um» и сокращений («gonna»).

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, especially before I go out, so I can decide what to wear and plan my activities.

Sugestão: Дайте более точные примеры и одно связное объяснение последствий. Используйте связки (for example, as a result) и конкретику (which countries, consequences).

Exemplo: I think climate change has serious effects on people and wildlife. For example, warmer summers have increased the frequency of forest fires in southern Europe, leading to habitat loss and more air pollution.

Sugestão: Отвечайте увереннее и структурировано: начните с краткого «да» + причина, затем приведите конкретные примеры мест и что именно вы хотите испытать. Избегайте повторов и пауз.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I want to visit places in Africa or northern South America to experience a hot, dry climate and see how people adapt their daily life and culture to such weather.

× I live in Saint Petersburg, which is another country in Russia, so the weather conditions are not very comfortable there.

✓ I live in Saint Petersburg, which is a city in Russia, so the weather conditions are not very comfortable there.

The phrase 'another country in Russia' is incorrect because Saint Petersburg is not a separate country; it is a city. Replace 'another country' with 'a city' to accurately describe the place. Also use 'in Russia' after 'city' to show location. Suggestion: use accurate noun and correct preposition for location.

× There are usually gloomy days and a lack of sun so and there are a lot of rainy days.

✓ There are usually gloomy days and a lack of sun, and there are a lot of rainy days.

The sentence contains redundant conjunctions 'so and'. Use a single conjunction 'and' (or 'so') to connect clauses. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate coordinated clauses. Suggestion: choose one connector and remove extras.

× I prefer hot weather because in these conditions I feel myself more energized and motivated, while when it's cold I spend a lot of energy on just to warm myself.

✓ I prefer hot weather because in those conditions I feel more energized and motivated, while when it's cold I spend a lot of energy just to warm myself.

Avoid using 'feel myself'—English uses 'feel' with an adjective, not a reflexive pronoun. Replace 'these' with 'those' to refer to conditions mentioned generally. Remove unnecessary 'on' before 'just to warm myself'. Suggestion: use 'feel more energized' and 'spend energy just to...'. Note: this covers both incorrect pronoun/reflexive use and extra preposition.

× I prefer the wet weather, especially going outdoors after the rain has fallen and umm I feel must I feel that atmosphere is more moisture and it's easier to breathe.

✓ I prefer wet weather, especially going outdoors after the rain has fallen; I feel that the atmosphere is more humid and it's easier to breathe.

Use 'wet weather' without 'the' for general preference. The phrase 'I feel must I feel' is disfluent and incorrect—keep 'I feel'. Use the adjective 'humid' rather than 'more moisture'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect related clauses. Suggestion: simplify and use correct adjective.

× Yes, I check weather forecast every day, especially when I plan to go to some places and, uh, I have to plan what to wear and so I, umm, analyze what, uh, weather is gonna be today.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, especially when I plan to go somewhere and I have to decide what to wear, so I analyze what the weather is going to be today.

Need the definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast'. Use 'somewhere' instead of 'some places' for natural phrasing. Replace informal 'gonna' with 'going to' and remove extra fillers. 'Analyze what the weather is going to be' is grammatically correct. Suggestion: include articles and use standard future form.

× For instance, there is an increase of forest fires in the European countries in the summer and it has a very large impact.

✓ For instance, there has been an increase in forest fires in European countries in the summer, and it has had a very large impact.

Use 'an increase in' rather than 'increase of'. 'European countries' does not need 'the' here. Use present perfect 'has been' to show recent change and 'has had' to show resulting impact. Suggestion: choose correct preposition and tense for recent trends.

× Yes, I would like to have such experience. Uh, for instance, I would like to visit some countries in Africa or South in South America, uh, to experience uh, their climate, which is more dry and hot.

✓ Yes, I would like to have that experience. For instance, I would like to visit some countries in Africa or South America to experience their climates, which are drier and hotter.

Use 'that experience' instead of 'such experience' for natural phrasing. 'South in South America' is incorrect—use 'South America'. Use plural 'climates' and plural agreement 'are drier and hotter' to match. Use comparative adjectives 'drier' and 'hotter' rather than 'more dry and hot'. Suggestion: fix word order and comparative forms.