Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and accurate: begin with a clear topic sentence stating the typical weather, then give 1–2 specific details (seasons, extremes) using correct vocabulary and avoid fillers and repetition. Use linking words (for example, although, however) to connect ideas. Also correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and pronunciation of place names if needed.

Exemplo: I live in Dhaka, and the climate is generally very humid. We experience several distinct seasons, so some months are very hot while others are quite rainy. Overall, the humidity is the most noticeable feature of our weather.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence (I prefer cold weather) then give two clear reasons, linked logically. Avoid repeating phrases like “I find myself” and fix grammar (hot weather triggers my migraines). Keep within four sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather. Hot conditions often trigger my severe migraines, so I feel healthier in cooler temperatures. In cold weather I also feel calmer and can concentrate better on my work.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opening sentence and then give specific sensory details linked logically. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'the purest season' → 'the most pleasant season'; 'I feel very peaceful'). Avoid simple repetition at the end.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather. Living in Bangladesh, I especially enjoy the rainy season because I love the sound of rain, the fresh smell of wet earth, and the relaxed atmosphere it creates.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give frequency and methods. Use correct verb forms and reduce filler phrases. Add linking words to sequence actions (for example, first, then). Mention specific times or reasons to make it more concrete.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone several times a day. Usually I look in the morning for the day’s temperature and again in the evening to see the next 7-day forecast so I can plan my activities.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence about observed effects, then provide 2–3 specific examples (seasonal changes, extreme weather, impacts on agriculture) connected with linking words. Fix grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'we can no longer distinguish the seasons'). Avoid vague statements like 'it's been changing since long'.

Exemplo: I have noticed that climate change has reduced the distinctiveness of our seasons. For example, winters are shorter and milder while rainy and hot periods last longer, which has affected farming schedules and increased flooding in some areas.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give 1–2 specific examples of climates or cities you want to visit and why, using linking words to organize ideas. Avoid repetition ("I love, I love") and informal phrases like 'and all'. Mention activities you would do to make the response more concrete.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy traveling and would like to visit very cold places such as Reykjavík to experience snow and winter landscapes. I would also like to visit hot desert cities like Dubai to see how people adapt to extreme heat and try local cuisine.

× I live in Taco and it's very humid here because we have six season and summing up all of them together, sometimes it's very hot, sometimes it's very cold cold and sometimes it's very rainy.

✓ I live in Taco and it's very humid here because we have six seasons and, summing up all of them together, sometimes it's very hot, sometimes it's very cold and sometimes it's very rainy.

Error: missing plural form for 'season' and minor repetition 'cold cold'. Use plural 'seasons' because you refer to more than one. Remove duplicate word and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: always check noun number when referring to multiple items and proofread for repeated words.

× So the weather is a mixture of a lot of umm, things.

✓ So the weather is a mixture of a lot of things.

Error: unnecessary filler 'umm' and comma placement. The verb 'is' is correct, but remove filler words for clarity. Suggestion: avoid filler words in formal responses and keep sentences concise.

× I would end up by saying humidity.

✓ I would end by saying that it's humid.

Error: awkward sentence structure and incorrect noun use. 'End up by saying humidity' is unnatural. Use 'end by saying that it's humid' to express the conclusion. Suggestion: rephrase to a complete clause when summarizing.

× I find myself a cold loving person.

✓ I consider myself a person who loves the cold.

Error: incorrect pronoun/phrase 'find myself a cold loving person'. Use 'consider myself' or 'I am a person who loves the cold' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'consider myself' or 'I am' + relative clause.

× I love winter a lot because I have severe migraines for hot weather do trigger that thing.

✓ I love winter a lot because hot weather triggers my severe migraines.

Errors: incorrect clause order and redundancy 'do trigger that thing'. Combine clauses: subject 'hot weather' + verb 'triggers' + object 'my severe migraines'. Suggestion: express cause-effect directly and avoid vague phrases like 'that thing'.

× So whenever I am in a cold place I find myself more into relaxation.

✓ So whenever I am in a cold place I feel more relaxed.

Error: incorrect use of 'find myself more into relaxation' (awkward and wordy). Use adjective 'relaxed' with 'feel' to describe state. Suggestion: prefer 'feel relaxed' for natural expression.

× I find myself calm, I can work better.

✓ I feel calm and can work better.

Error: repetition 'find myself calm' is wordy and comma splice. Combine into one sentence with 'and'. Suggestion: use 'feel' and link clauses correctly.

× Wet weather. I live in Bangladesh and rainy season is the most purest season here.

✓ Wet weather. I live in Bangladesh and the rainy season is the purest season here.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'rainy season' and incorrect use of 'most purest' (double comparative). Use 'the rainy season' and 'the purest season' or simply 'the purest'. Suggestion: do not combine 'most' with '-est' forms.

× I like rain a lot, the sound, the humidity level, everything is very enjoyable.

✓ I like the rain a lot; the sound, the humidity level — everything is very enjoyable.

Error: missing article 'the' before 'rain' and awkward punctuation. Use 'the rain' when referring to the rain in general and connect ideas clearly. Suggestion: use articles consistently and vary sentence connectors.

× I feel very peace and I like the smell of when the rain mixed with the mud.

✓ I feel very peaceful and I like the smell when the rain mixes with the mud.

Errors: 'feel very peace' uses noun instead of adjective; should be 'feel very peaceful'. Tense and form: 'when the rain mixed' should be present simple 'mixes' to describe general truth. Suggestion: use appropriate adjective forms and present simple for habitual statements.

× Yes, I do have this habit and I do continuously checking them using my phone.

✓ Yes, I do have this habit and I continuously check them using my phone.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'do continuously checking' — modal/auxiliary 'do' should be followed by base verb 'check'. Remove extra 'do' before continuous form. Suggestion: use 'do' + base verb for emphasis or use present continuous 'am continuously checking'.

× Whenever something pops up, I'm just go there and check what's the temperature right now, what will be the temperature at night, what will be the next seven days forecast.

✓ Whenever something pops up, I just go there and check the current temperature, the temperature at night, and the forecast for the next seven days.

Errors: contraction 'I'm just go' incorrect; should be 'I just go'. Also awkward phrasing 'what's the temperature right now' is fine in speech but use 'the current temperature' for clarity. 'what will be the next seven days forecast' incorrect word order; use 'the forecast for the next seven days'. Suggestion: use parallel structure when listing items.

× So I love it. I kind of find myself doing it again and again.

✓ So I love it. I find myself doing it again and again.

Error: 'kind of' is informal filler and may weaken the statement; present tense 'find' is fine. Suggestion: omit 'kind of' for clearer response.

× Being an aspiring environmentalist, climate change is a very important topic for me.

✓ As an aspiring environmentalist, I consider climate change a very important topic.

Error: dangling modifier — 'Being an aspiring environmentalist' should modify the subject that follows. Original incorrectly suggests climate change is the aspiring environmentalist. Suggestion: make subject 'I' after the introductory phrase.

× The climate change in our country severely can be noticed.

✓ Climate change in our country can be noticed severely.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'The' before 'climate change' when speaking generally; awkward adverb placement 'severely can be noticed'. Better: 'Climate change in our country is noticeable' or 'Climate change in our country can be noticed severely'. Suggestion: use natural adjective 'noticeable' and correct article usage.

× We used to have six seasons. Right now we don't even cannot defer them.

✓ We used to have six seasons. Right now we cannot even distinguish them.

Errors: double negative 'don't even cannot' is incorrect. Verb choice 'defer' is wrong; should be 'distinguish' or 'tell apart'. Suggestion: avoid double negatives and choose correct verbs for meaning.

× It's always either summer or rainy, very less cold here.

✓ It's almost always either summer or rainy; it is rarely cold here.

Errors: 'very less cold' is ungrammatical. Use 'rarely cold' or 'seldom cold'. Also make sentence flow smoother. Suggestion: use adverbs 'rarely' or 'seldom' to express low frequency.

× So the climate change has been a serious topic and it's been changing since long.

✓ So climate change has been a serious topic and it has been changing for a long time.

Errors: unnecessary 'the' before 'climate change'; 'since long' is incorrect — use 'for a long time' with present perfect continuous. Suggestion: use 'for a long time' to indicate duration.

× Yes, I like traveling. I love, I love exploring some city which are very cold.

✓ Yes, I like traveling. I love exploring cities that are very cold.

Errors: repetition 'I love, I love' unnecessary. 'some city which are' has number disagreement and incorrect relative pronoun; use plural 'cities that are' or 'cities which are'. Suggestion: remove repetition and ensure subject-verb and number agreement.

× There are some cities which are very hot. I would love to explore them and try their sights and all.

✓ There are some cities that are very hot. I would love to explore them and see their sights.

Errors: 'which' vs 'that' acceptable but 'try their sights and all' is informal/incorrect. Use 'see their sights' or 'visit their attractions'. Suggestion: use precise verbs like 'see' or 'visit' and avoid vague phrase 'and all'.

× I'm very open about changing climates.

✓ I'm very open to experiencing different climates.

Error: 'open about changing climates' is awkward; use 'open to experiencing' or 'open to visiting places with different climates'. Suggestion: use 'open to' + -ing or noun to express willingness.