Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence describing the weather, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say whether you experience four seasons or mainly rainy/tropical weather, mention typical temperatures or how the seasons affect daily life, and use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Exemplo: I live in a region with three main seasons: hot summer, rainy monsoon and cool winter. I like winter best because temperatures drop to around 10–15°C and the air feels fresh, so outdoor activities are more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Answer clearly with one direct statement of preference, then give two specific reasons linked logically. Reduce filler words (uh, um) and correct subject-verb agreement. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas succinctly.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable and I sweat less. Also, nature looks nicer in cool weather, which makes outdoor activities like walking much more pleasant.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference and a brief explanation. If you like both, state that and then explain which you prefer and why with specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and repeat vocabulary. Use cohesive words such as "however", "because" or "although".

Exemplo: I enjoy both dry and wet weather, but I prefer the rainy season because light rain cools the air and makes the landscape greener. For example, the monsoon makes walking outside feel refreshing and the streets smell fresh after rain.

Sugestão: Provide a concise routine: say clearly how often you check and give specific situations when you check. Mention the method (phone app, TV, website) to add detail. Remove hesitations and finish sentences fully.

Exemplo: I don't check the forecast every day, but I do check it before I go out or before a trip. Usually I use a weather app on my phone to see if it will rain so I can plan whether to bring an umbrella or change travel plans.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence about one or two key effects, then give specific examples or evidence. Use correct grammar and avoid vague or confusing phrasing. Link ideas with words like "for example", "as a result" and keep sentences short and precise.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused more unpredictable seasons and extreme weather in recent years. For example, summers are getting hotter and monsoons arrive at different times, which harms farming and makes planning daily life difficult.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes/no followed by two specific reasons or examples of places you want to visit and what you would do there. Use correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Mention activities and describe the climate briefly to show contrast.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I want to visit mountain cities because the cool, fresh air and scenic trails are perfect for trekking. For instance, I would like to go to a hill station to hike, enjoy the views and escape the heat of my hometown.

× But I like the all weather summer, winter and monsoon.

✓ But I like all the seasons: summer, winter and monsoon.

The phrase 'the all weather' is incorrect article and noun usage. Use 'all the seasons' or 'all seasons' to refer to multiple seasons. Also list items with commas for clarity.

× But my most favorite is the winter is my favorite Uh wait waiter because of the in winter there are the coolest environment and the nature are so chill so we can.

✓ But my favorite season is winter because the weather is the coolest and the natural surroundings are so calm and pleasant.

This sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive ('most favorite' and 'is my favorite' repeated). 'Wait waiter' is filler and should be removed. Use 'favorite season' and correct noun-verb agreement: 'the natural surroundings are' not 'nature are'. Use 'calm and pleasant' instead of 'chill' for clarity.

× I prefer cold weather because of uh, because of the cold weather, the nature are so chill and our body is also chill, so we are comfortable and enjoying them, enjoying the nature in what we are already hot, hot and the sweating are there, so we.

✓ I prefer cold weather because nature is calmer and our bodies feel comfortable, whereas in hot weather we sweat and feel uncomfortable.

Pronoun and noun agreement errors: 'the nature are' should be 'nature is' or 'the natural surroundings are'. 'Our body is also chill' should be 'our bodies feel comfortable'. Remove repetition and filler. Make contrast clear using 'whereas' and correct verb forms.

× Both are try and wait whether I like but among them the most preferable the waiter weather like the monsoon is the umm rain occurring the rain and we are the slightly wet and the enjoying the moment.

✓ I like both dry and wet weather, but I prefer monsoon because I enjoy the rain and the cool, slightly wet atmosphere.

Phrases like 'Both are try and wait whether I like' are incorrect. Use 'I like both' to express preference. 'Most preferable' is incorrect; use 'prefer' or 'preferable'. Clarify meaning and correct word choice: 'monsoon' and 'enjoy the rain'.

× The environment is the cool and the nature.

✓ The environment is cool and the natural scenery is beautiful.

Unnecessary use of 'the' before adjectives and nouns ('the cool', 'the nature'). Use 'cool' without 'the' and a clearer noun phrase 'natural scenery'.

× I have no habit of checking the weather forecast, but I check when I have to go to outside or to go for the trip.

✓ I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast, but I check it when I need to go outside or go on a trip.

Use natural negative form 'don't have a habit' and include the object 'it' for 'check the forecast'. 'Go to outside' is incorrect; use 'go outside'. 'Go for the trip' should be 'go on a trip'.

× When, uh, I watch, I, I am checking the weather, uh, forecast because if the according to that, I can, uh, manage my.

✓ When I plan to go out, I check the weather forecast because that information helps me plan accordingly.

Remove fillers and fix conjunction usage: 'if the according to that' is ungrammatical. Use 'because that information helps me' and finish the sentence with the object 'plan accordingly'.

× Yes, that are the too much effect of the climate change in recent years, uh, for example, uh, at the early year, the three with arrived at the summer monsoon and the winter and according to that winter at the changing, but nowadays there is the no any summer, winter or month, so there anytime.

✓ Yes, climate change has had many effects in recent years. For example, seasonal patterns have changed: summers, monsoons and winters no longer arrive at the usual times, and seasons are less distinct now.

Many structural and tense errors: 'that are the too much effect' should be 'climate change has had many effects'. 'At the early year' should be 'in earlier years'. 'There is the no any' is incorrect; use 'seasons are less distinct' or 'there are no clear seasons'.

× Yes, definitely I like to visit other cities that have a different climate from the I live.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to visit other cities that have a different climate from where I live.

Missing auxiliary 'would' makes the sentence sound incomplete. 'From the I live' is incorrect; use 'from where I live'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct relative clause.

× We heard about that mostly I like to the mountains and the Chilo city so I can the trekking on the mountain and there is the nature are so cool and chill and the enjoying the most preferable mood.

✓ For example, I would like to visit the mountains and places like Chitral so I can go trekking; the nature there is cool and peaceful, which I find very enjoyable.

Many errors: 'We heard about that' is unclear and unnecessary. Use 'For example' or 'I would like to'. 'Chilo city' likely refers to 'Chitral' or a mountain city; use correct place name. Fix verb forms: 'go trekking', 'the nature there is' and make the sentence concise and grammatical.