Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp. Nên dùng 2–3 câu, bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào nóng, khi nào lạnh, nhiệt độ trung bình hoặc ví dụ về mùa). Tránh từ không rõ như “How?” và sửa lỗi số nhiều/đơn (day → days).

Exemplo: In my hometown the weather is mainly either hot or cold. Summers are usually hot and humid, while winters are quite cold with temperatures often around 5–10°C. There are also several chilly days even outside winter.

Sugestão: Cần bắt đầu trực tiếp, tránh liên từ thừa như “And”. Sử dụng thì và cấu trúc động từ đúng (e.g. go → going; make → makes). Giữ tối đa 3 câu, nêu lý do và ví dụ cụ thể, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (relaxed, energetic).

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to do outdoor activities. For example, I often play sports, go swimming and cycle, which makes me feel energetic and relaxed.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa (“dragon” sai từ). Cần trả lời trực tiếp (dry or wet), giải thích cụ thể vì sao, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và lựa chọn từ chính xác (e.g. uncomfortable, unhealthy, inconvenient). Hạn chế thêm từ thừa như “maybe”.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions feel uncomfortable and can be unhealthy. For instance, rainy days make it difficult to go out and I often catch colds more easily.

Sugestão: Trả lời thẳng rồi bổ sung thời gian cụ thể; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (it is make → it helps me know). Giữ câu ngắn gọn, dùng linking words nếu cần (for example, so). Thêm chi tiết về nguồn thông tin (app, TV) sẽ tốt.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast daily, usually in the morning or the evening before bed. It helps me decide what to wear and plan my activities, and I usually check a weather app on my phone.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rồi nêu các hậu quả cụ thể (ví dụ: nhiệt độ tăng, mưa lớn, hạn hán, ảnh hưởng đến nông nghiệp và sức khỏe). Tránh cấu trúc ngữ pháp sai (in recently → recently; like is making → such as making).

Exemplo: Recently, climate change has caused more extreme weather in my area, such as heavier rains and higher temperatures. These changes have made living conditions more dangerous and have affected agriculture and public health.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn (Yes/No), tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp (have → has; adopt → adapt). Nên giải thích với lý do cụ thể và có thể đưa ví dụ ngắn. Giữ trong 2–3 câu.

Exemplo: No, I probably wouldn't like to visit cities with very different climates because I have adapted to the weather here. For example, extreme cold or humidity would make it hard for me to feel comfortable on a short trip.

× However, there are also many cold day in the year.

✓ However, there are also many cold days in the year.

'Day' is singular but 'many' requires a plural noun, so use 'days'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns with quantifiers like many, several, few.

× And for me, I prefer hot weather more because I can do many things outside the door when the weather is hot, such as playing sport, go swimming or cycling.

✓ And for me, I prefer hot weather more because I can do many things outside when the weather is hot, such as playing sports, going swimming or cycling.

'Playing sport' should be 'playing sports' for natural English; 'go swimming' should be 'going swimming' to match the parallel -ing form after 'such as'. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure and use -ing forms after 'such as'.

× Yeah, this make me feel really healthy and I'm really relaxed.

✓ Yeah, this makes me feel really healthy and relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement: 'this' requires 'makes' (third person singular). 'I'm really relaxed' is repetitive; 'relaxed' without 'I'm' after 'feel' keeps sentence concise. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with subject and avoid redundancy.

× I like the dragon because in the wet weather it is really cold for me and easy, unhealthy and maybe inconvenient for me to stay at home.

✓ I don't like rainy weather because in wet weather it is really cold for me and it can be unhealthy and inconvenient to stay at home.

Original 'the dragon' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'rain' or 'rainy weather'. Pronoun and structure issues: add 'it' for impersonal subject and use 'can be' for possibility. Suggestion: Use correct nouns and include impersonal 'it' with weather descriptions.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast every day in the morning or the late evening or the day before.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast every morning, late evening, or the day before.

'In the morning' and 'the late evening' can be simplified to 'every morning' and 'late evening'; present participle 'checking' is fine. Remove unnecessary prepositions for natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use concise time expressions and maintain -ing form after 'have a habit of'.

× It is make me know what I have to wear on the next day and it is really useful for me.

✓ It helps me know what I have to wear the next day and is really useful for me.

'It is make' is ungrammatical; use 'helps' (third person singular) or 'it helps'. Also 'on the next day' is unnatural; use 'the next day'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms (help + base verb) and natural time expressions.

× The effects of climate change in recently caused many difficulties to the habitat in our area, like is making the condition more dangerous and more uncomfortable.

✓ The effects of climate change recently have caused many difficulties for habitats in our area, such as making conditions more dangerous and uncomfortable.

'In recently' is incorrect; use 'recently'. 'Caused' with 'have caused' fits present relevance. 'To the habitat' should be 'for habitats' or 'to habitats'. 'Like is making' is ungrammatical; use 'such as making'. Suggestion: Use adverb placement 'recently', correct prepositions ('for' or 'to'), and 'such as' before -ing clauses.

× I think I don't like to visit another one which have different climates because I think I can adopt this kind of weather well because I have a long time living here and that's my opinion.

✓ I don't think I would like to visit other places that have different climates because I think I can adapt to this kind of weather well since I have lived here for a long time.

Pronoun and modal issues: 'another one which have' should be 'other places that have' with plural agreement. 'Adopt' is wrong; use 'adapt'. 'I have a long time living here' should be 'I have lived here for a long time' or 'since I have lived here for a long time'. Suggestion: Use 'adapt' for adjusting, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct tense for duration ('have lived for').