Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise and use a clear topic sentence. Give one or two specific supporting details and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'however' or 'although' to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: It is usually very cold where I live, and we get snow for much of the year. However, I enjoy wet, snowy weather because it feels cozy and makes outdoor walks more peaceful.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason for your preference and avoid repeating phrases. Use one topic sentence then a supporting reason with a specific example. Keep the answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can wear lighter, more stylish clothes comfortably. For example, in summer I usually wear T-shirts and chinos which I find more convenient than layering many heavy items in winter.

Sugestão: Clarify your meaning and focus on two clear reasons. Avoid unclear words (e.g. 'vendor') and provide specific, relevant details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to stay clean and active. For example, in dry conditions my shoes and clothes stay clean and I can exercise outside without worrying about mud.

Sugestão: Answer directly with frequency and purpose, using a complete topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid unfinished sentences and repetition. Use time expressions like 'every morning' or 'before I leave'.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for work. I do this to decide whether to take public transport or drive and to choose suitable clothing for the day.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, specific opinion and support it with concrete examples or consequences. Avoid vague statements and repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and mention visible effects such as temperature changes, extreme weather or sea-level rise.

Exemplo: I think climate change has led to more extreme weather in recent years. For example, we have seen hotter summers and heavier storms, which damage crops and increase flooding in some areas.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a specific example of a place and why you want to visit it. Keep sentences clear and avoid irrelevant location details. Use linking words like 'for example' to support your reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new environments. For example, I would love to visit a warm, dry city so I can enjoy outdoor activities and sunbathing, which are rare in my rainy home city.

× The weather like where I am live is extremely cold for many days like snow is most of the times as compared to hot weather rainy spring.

✓ The weather where I live has been extremely cold for many days; it often snows compared with the hot, rainy spring.

Multiple sentence-structure problems: missing auxiliary and incorrect word order ('where I am live' -> 'where I live'), wrong tense/continuity (use present perfect continuous or present perfect: 'has been' for a recent period), and unclear comparison. Combine ideas into a clear sentence and use appropriate verbs ('snows' for habitual action). Suggestion: keep subject close to verb and use connectors like ';' or 'and' to join related clauses.

× But I like the wet weather because it makes me feel good.

✓ But I like wet weather because it makes me feel good.

Article use with uncountable noun: 'the wet weather' is acceptable but more natural here is 'wet weather' without 'the'. Also 'but' is okay to contrast; pronoun use is correct. Suggestion: drop 'the' for general statements about weather.

× I prefer hot weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather.

This sentence is correct and appropriately simple for the question. No change needed.

× In hot weather I usually wear good looking dress as compared to in hot weather.

✓ In hot weather I usually wear good-looking clothes rather than in cold weather.

Repetition and wrong comparison: original repeats 'in hot weather' and uses incorrect noun form 'dress' (singular) and missing hyphen 'good-looking'. Use 'clothes' plural for general clothing and compare to the opposite condition ('cold weather') using 'rather than'. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same phrase and use parallel structures for comparison.

× I want.

✓ (Remove)

Fragment: 'I want.' is incomplete without an object or clause. It appears to be leftover and should be removed or completed (e.g., 'I want lighter clothes.'). Suggestion: always include what you want or delete the fragment.

× In cold weather I want to so many clothes to protect from the cold.

✓ In cold weather I need to wear many layers of clothing to protect myself from the cold.

Several errors: 'want to so many clothes' is ungrammatical. Use 'need to wear' to express necessity, 'many' modifies plural countable noun 'layers' or 'clothes', and reflexive pronoun needed with 'protect' ('protect myself'). Also use 'from the cold'. Suggestion: use 'wear many layers' or 'wear a lot of clothes' and include subject of 'protect'.

× I prefer dry vendor as compared to wet weather because in dry weather we drink lots of water as compared to wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather because in dry weather we drink a lot more water than in wet weather.

'Dry vendor' is incorrect word choice; should be 'dry weather'. Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'as compared to'. Use 'a lot more' for comparison and repeat the prepositional phrase in parallel form. Suggestion: use parallel structures and correct collocations: 'prefer X to Y', 'drink a lot more water'.

× Wet weather makes our clothes dirty, shoes dirty and our house then our house also become dirty due to bed.

✓ Wet weather makes our clothes and shoes dirty, and our house can become dirty as well, for example because of mud.

Run-on and repetition: 'shoes dirty and our house then our house' repeats phrases and lacks verbs. 'Become' needs auxiliary 'can' or 'may' for possibility and 'due to bed' is unclear; likely meant 'mud' or 'dirt'. Suggestion: list items cleanly and provide a clear cause ('because of mud').

× Yes, I have it too.

✓ Yes, I do too.

Awkward phrasing: 'I have it too' is vague. When asked about a habit, use 'I do' to refer to the habit mentioned ('I do too' = I also have that habit). Suggestion: use 'do' to substitute for a previously mentioned activity.

× I have the habit of checking weather forecast when I usually go to the work.

✓ I have a habit of checking the weather forecast when I usually go to work.

Article and word order: use 'a habit' and 'the weather forecast'. Omit 'the' before 'work' when referring generally to going to work. 'When I usually go to work' is acceptable; you can also say 'when I go to work'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and omit unnecessary articles.

× I often use daily basis whether that the weather is good outside to travel with the public transport or with the car.

✓ I often check the weather on a daily basis to see whether it is good to travel by public transport or by car.

Misuse of verbs and nouns: 'use daily basis' should be 'check ... on a daily basis'. 'Whether that the weather is good' should be 'whether it is good'. Use 'by public transport' or 'by car' rather than 'with'. Suggestion: use correct collocations: 'check the weather', 'on a daily basis', 'whether it is good to travel by...'.

× If there is a good weather then I.

✓ If the weather is good, I go by public transport or drive.

Fragment and article error: 'a good weather' should be 'the weather is good' or 'good weather'. The clause is incomplete; complete it with the action you take. Suggestion: finish conditional sentences with the main clause.

× Yes, I think, yes, I think so many facts change in recent years.

✓ Yes, I think many things have changed in recent years.

Word choice and tense: 'so many facts change' is unnatural; use 'many things have changed'. Use present perfect for recent changes continuing to present. Suggestion: use 'have changed' and natural collocation 'many things'.

× In the climate, for example, nowadays there is no less noise compared to previous year.

✓ For example, in recent years there has been more noise compared with previous years.

Incorrect comparative phrasing: 'no less noise' is awkward; likely meant 'more noise'. Use 'in recent years' or present perfect 'there has been'. Use plural 'previous years' or 'the previous year'. Suggestion: use clear comparatives ('more') and correct time expressions.

× Yes, I would like to visit other countries that have different climate from my city from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other countries that have climates different from the one in the city where I live.

Article and noun-number agreement: 'different climate' -> 'climates different from the one in the city' or 'a climate different from my city'. Rearrange for clarity: 'where I live' should follow 'city'. Suggestion: ensure plural/singular agreement and place modifiers next to the nouns they modify.

× I live in Richmond.

✓ I live in Richmond.

This sentence is correct. No change needed.

× In Vancouver there is a gold as well as rainy climate and in my home country there is a hot climate.

✓ In Vancouver the climate is mild and rainy, and in my home country it is hot.

'Gold' is incorrect; likely meant 'mild' or 'cold'. Use 'the climate is' or 'it is' and keep adjectives appropriate. Also match grammar: 'there is a hot climate' -> 'it is hot'. Suggestion: choose correct adjective ('mild' or 'cold') and use simple structures: 'In Vancouver the climate is...'.