Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and directly address the question by specifying typical times you eat snacks. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 3 or 4 pm. For example, just two hours ago, I enjoyed a homemade pizza with lots of veggies, cheese, and delicious sauces that I made myself.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to explain why you think snacks are healthy and give specific examples of the snacks you prefer.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy for me because I usually take 2-3 boxes of fresh vegetable snacks to the office. These help me stay energized between meals and maintain a balanced diet.

Sugestão: Focus on correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be specific about your habits and feelings.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to eat snacks very often when I was young, even more than I do now. Because of this habit, I still eat snacks 2-3 times between meals as they give me energy and help me feel confident and relaxed while working.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect your preferences and the benefits you get from these snacks.

Exemplo: I like to eat snacks that are delicious and healthy. Most of the time, I choose vegetable or fruit snacks mixed with salt, lemon juice, or fresh sauces because they refresh me and give me energy to start my day.

× I love eating and I think most of the time I spend eating something new.

✓ I love eating and I think most of the time I spend trying something new.

The phrase 'spend eating something new' is awkward because 'spend' is usually followed by 'verb + -ing' to indicate the activity. Here, 'trying something new' is more appropriate to express the idea of experiencing new foods rather than continuously eating them.

× And recently I had my snacks.

✓ Recently, I had some snacks.

The phrase 'I had my snacks' is unnatural in this context. Using 'some snacks' is more appropriate to indicate that the speaker ate snacks recently. Also, starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be avoided for clarity.

× Just two hours ago I had a homemade pizza with a lot of veggies and cheese and with delicious sauces and I made it for myself and.

✓ Just two hours ago, I had a homemade pizza with a lot of veggies, cheese, and delicious sauces, which I made myself.

The original sentence is run-on and ends abruptly with 'and'. It needs proper punctuation and restructuring to be clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes I believe eating snacks is always healthy for me as I am eat a lot of snacks and when I am in office I always take 2-3 box of snacks with me to have in between the meals and most preferably fresh veggie snacks I like to eat.

✓ Yes, I believe eating snacks is always healthy for me as I eat a lot of snacks, and when I am in the office, I always take 2-3 boxes of snacks with me to have between meals, preferably fresh veggie snacks which I like to eat.

The phrase 'I am eat' is incorrect; it should be 'I eat'. Also, '2-3 box' should be plural '2-3 boxes'. 'In office' needs the definite article 'the office'. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity.

× Yes, when I was young I eat a lot of snacks, even more than today.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I ate a lot of snacks, even more than today.

The verb 'eat' should be in the past tense 'ate' to match the past time reference 'when I was young'.

× I eat when I was a child.

✓ I ate when I was a child.

The verb 'eat' should be in the past tense 'ate' to agree with the past time 'when I was a child'.

× So it become my habit nowadays to eat 2-3 times snacks in between the meals because I feel they give me more energy and I feel confident and relaxed that my tummy is full and have to work.

✓ So it has become my habit nowadays to eat snacks 2-3 times between meals because I feel they give me more energy, and I feel confident and relaxed knowing that my tummy is full and I have to work.

The verb 'become' should be 'has become' to indicate present perfect tense. The phrase '2-3 times snacks' is awkward; 'eat snacks 2-3 times' is better. The sentence is long and needs commas and conjunctions for clarity. 'have to work' needs subject 'I'.

× I prefer every snacks which is delicious for me.

✓ I prefer every snack which is delicious to me.

'Every' is used with singular countable nouns, so 'snacks' should be 'snack'. Also, 'which is delicious for me' is better expressed as 'which is delicious to me'.

× Most of the time I try to eat vegetables or fruit snacks mixed with some salt or lemon juices or some fresh sauces.

✓ Most of the time, I try to eat vegetable or fruit snacks mixed with some salt, lemon juice, or some fresh sauces.

'Vegetables or fruit snacks' should be 'vegetable or fruit snacks' as adjectives modifying 'snacks'. 'Lemon juices' should be singular 'lemon juice' as an uncountable noun. Commas are added for clarity.