Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repeating the same information. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks in the evening during my free time because I finish my studies by 5 PM and start work at 6 PM. For example, I often have a cup of coffee with some light snacks to keep me energized.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some unclear phrases. Focus on giving a clear opinion and support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe eating healthy snacks is beneficial because they provide essential nutrients. For instance, boiled vegetables and fresh fruits are nutritious options that help maintain energy levels.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, my mother would give me two or three snacks along with cold coffee or milkshake in the evening while I was playing cricket to keep me healthy and energized.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I enjoy a variety of healthy snacks in my daily routine. For instance, I often eat boiled vegetables rich in vitamins and fibre, as well as boiled pulses and corn, which provide good nutrition.

× my mother always give me two to three snacks during the evening time when I was playing cricket outside my home

✓ my mother always gives me two to three snacks during the evening time when I was playing cricket outside my home

The subject 'my mother' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'gives' instead of 'give' to agree in number and person.

× my mother always give me two to three snacks during the evening time when I was playing cricket outside my home

✓ my mother always gave me two to three snacks during the evening time when I was playing cricket outside my home

The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the verb should be in the past tense 'gave' instead of present tense 'gives' or 'give'.

× I usually eat some snacks in the evening with a cup of coffee during my free time because I'm free in the evening and I'm done with my studies at around 5:00 PM and I have work after 6:00 PM till 10:00 PM in the night.

✓ I usually eat some snacks in the evening with a cup of coffee during my free time because I'm free in the evening and I'm done with my studies at around 5:00 PM and I have work from 6:00 PM till 10:00 PM at night.

The preposition 'after' is incorrect when indicating a time range; 'from' is appropriate to indicate the start time, and 'at night' is the correct phrase instead of 'in the night'.

× Yes, it is very healthy to eat some snacks during your free time because you can have some vegetables, boil boiled vegetables and some of the new meals filled with the nutrition and some of the healthy cons and you can have some uh.

✓ Yes, it is very healthy to eat some snacks during your free time because you can have some vegetables, boiled vegetables, and some new meals filled with nutrition and some healthy components.

The phrase 'boil boiled vegetables' is incorrect; 'boiled vegetables' is the correct adjective form. Also, 'the new meals' should be 'some new meals' and 'filled with the nutrition' should be 'filled with nutrition'. 'Healthy cons' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'healthy components' or 'nutrients' is more appropriate.

× she gave me some snacks and cold coffee or milkshake to give me uh to, to keep me healthy and energized during my playtime and.

✓ she gave me some snacks and cold coffee or milkshake to keep me healthy and energized during my playtime.

The phrase 'to give me uh to, to keep me' is redundant and awkward. The correct structure is 'to keep me healthy and energized', removing unnecessary pronouns and fillers.