Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better flow. For example, instead of "I have busy jobs and I need to work for long hours before the next meal," you could say "I am often busy working long hours before my next meal."

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks when I feel hungry but it's not yet time for a meal because I am often busy working long hours. Eating snacks helps me avoid feeling very hungry.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of "I think it is not not healthy," say "I think they are unhealthy."

Exemplo: It depends on the snacks I choose. I usually prefer healthier options like fruits or nuts, and I avoid unhealthy snacks such as chips, chocolates, and sweets because I think they are bad for my health.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and could be more natural. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating the word "snacks" unnecessarily. Also, try to add linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: When I was young, I didn't eat many snacks because I wasn't a big fan of them. However, I would eat some when I felt very stressed or hungry.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. For example, instead of "the sweet one with too much sugar," say "sweet chocolates with too much sugar."

Exemplo: I prefer healthier snacks like fresh or dried fruits. I also enjoy chocolate, but I avoid sweet chocolates with too much sugar and prefer dark chocolate over milk chocolate.

× I have busy jobs and I need to work for long hours before the next meal.

✓ I have busy work and I need to work for long hours before the next meal.

The phrase 'busy jobs' is incorrect because 'jobs' is plural and usually refers to different positions or roles. The correct term here is 'busy work', which refers to a lot of tasks or activities. This is a present tense issue because the noun phrase is incorrect in the present context.

× So some snacks can help me to prevent being very hungry.

✓ So some snacks can help me prevent being very hungry.

The verb 'help' is often followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to prevent' after 'help me' is incorrect. This is a verb + -ing form issue because the verb form after 'help' should be base form, not 'to' + verb.

× I usually prefer the more healthy food like fruit or nuts.

✓ I usually prefer healthier food like fruit or nuts.

The phrase 'the more healthy food' is incorrect. 'More healthy' should be 'healthier' as the comparative form of 'healthy'. Also, 'food' is uncountable here, so 'healthier food' is appropriate. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and adjectives issue.

× I also avoid some unhealthy food like the chips and like chocolate and sweets because I think it is not not healthy for my body.

✓ I also avoid some unhealthy foods like chips, chocolate, and sweets because I think they are not healthy for my body.

'Food' should be plural 'foods' when referring to different types. Also, 'the chips' is incorrect; 'chips' without 'the' is correct. 'It is not not healthy' has a double negative and should be 'they are not healthy' to agree with plural 'foods'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and subject-verb agreement issue.

× I just eat some snacks when I feel very stressful or feel very hungry.

✓ I just ate some snacks when I felt very stressed or felt very hungry.

The sentence refers to past habits, so past tense verbs 'ate' and 'felt' should be used instead of present tense 'eat' and 'feel'. Also, 'stressful' describes something causing stress; the correct adjective for a person feeling stress is 'stressed'. This is a past tense and adjective use issue.