Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better flow. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks before my night shift, around six in the evening, and sometimes during midnight when I feel hungry. Since I work 12-hour night shifts as a registered nurse, these snack times help me stay energized.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question well, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes and be more specific in your examples.

Exemplo: I believe some snacks are healthy while others are not. Therefore, I prefer to eat healthy snacks like fruits and nutritious foods that I bring to work. Although some people enjoy unhealthy snacks such as chocolate and chips, I try to avoid them to maintain my health.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more grammatically correct and structured. Use past tense consistently and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'like around'.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was young, I used to eat a lot of snacks such as chips, chocolate, and street food, especially around the age of 16 or 17. However, as I have grown older, I have realized that these unhealthy snacks are not beneficial for my health.

Sugestão: Your answer provides good details but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, clarify what 'the Tiffin' refers to for better understanding.

Exemplo: Before starting work, I usually eat chicken nuggets that I cook in an air fryer. During the night shift, I carry fruits and a packed meal, which I enjoy as my snacks.

× I would say during midnight I usually hungry and that time also I get sometimes snacks.

✓ I would say during midnight I am usually hungry and at that time I also sometimes get snacks.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to correctly form the present continuous tense 'I am usually hungry'. Also, the adverb 'sometimes' should be placed before the verb 'get' for correct adverb placement.

× There are different kind of snacks, some are healthy, some are non healthy.

✓ There are different kinds of snacks, some are healthy, some are unhealthy.

The phrase 'different kind' should be pluralized to 'different kinds' because it refers to multiple types. Also, 'non healthy' should be combined into the adjective 'unhealthy'.

× I would like to eat healthy snacks.

✓ I would like to eat healthy snacks.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I know some people love to eat a non healthy snacks like chocolate and chips which I try to avoid.

✓ I know some people love to eat unhealthy snacks like chocolate and chips, which I try to avoid.

The article 'a' is incorrect before the plural noun 'snacks'. Also, 'non healthy' should be 'unhealthy'. A comma is added before 'which' to separate the clause.

× For example, I eat chips, chocolate and going out and having all the street food when I was like around 16 or 17.

✓ For example, I ate chips, chocolate and went out and had all the street food when I was around 16 or 17.

The verbs should be in the past tense to match the time frame 'when I was around 16 or 17'. 'Eat' becomes 'ate', 'going out' becomes 'went out', and 'having' becomes 'had'.

× But now as I'm growing, I get to know that these unhealthy snacks are not really helpful.

✓ But now as I'm growing, I have come to know that these unhealthy snacks are not really helpful.

The phrase 'I get to know' is awkward in present tense; 'I have come to know' or 'I have learned' is more appropriate to express gaining knowledge over time.