Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify the time and use correct vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct mistakes (snacks, snakes), and give one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon when I finish schoolwork. For example, I’ll have a piece of fruit or a yogurt while I relax and watch a short show, because it helps me recharge before dinner.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) and accurate vocabulary (snacks, affect, contains). Keep it concise.

Exemplo: No, I don't think eating too many snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and unhealthy fats. For example, frequent consumption of sugary snacks can lead to weight gain and low energy levels.

Sugestão: Answer directly about past habits using correct past tense and vocabulary (snacks, listened → ate?). Explain one reason with a linking phrase (because, as, so) and one brief specific detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child because my mother frequently gave them to me. For instance, she would give me biscuits or fruit to keep me quiet while she was busy with household chores.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence naming specific snacks, then give a brief reason using correct grammar and linking words. Use precise vocabulary (healthy snacks, good for my health, help me stay well).

Exemplo: I prefer healthy snacks such as fresh fruit, nuts, and yogurt because they give me energy and are good for my health. For example, a handful of almonds keeps me full and helps me concentrate in the afternoon.

× Actually is I usually eat snakes in my free times when I don't go to school.

✓ Actually, I usually eat snacks in my free time when I don't go to school.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and wrong word forms: 'Actually is I' should be 'Actually, I'; 'snakes' is a wrong word (should be 'snacks'); 'free times' should be the uncountable phrase 'free time'. Rearranging to subject-verb order and using correct nouns fixes clarity and grammar.

× I think snake help me relax and it's very tasty.

✓ I think snacks help me relax and they are very tasty.

Plural noun 'snacks' must match plural verb 'help' and plural pronoun 'they'. 'It's' (it is) incorrectly refers to plural noun; change to 'they are'. Also 'snake' is wrong word choice; use 'snacks'.

× No, I don't think I think it snake too much is very effect on our health because it's contains many bad things when you eat too a lot.

✓ No, I don't think so. Eating too many snacks has a bad effect on our health because they contain many harmful ingredients when you eat too much.

The original has multiple issues: redundant 'I think I think', wrong pronoun/reference 'it snake', and incorrect determiners 'too much' vs 'too many'. Use gerund 'Eating' to make a noun phrase, 'too many snacks' for countable plural, 'has a bad effect' for correct collocation, and 'they contain' to match plural noun. Also 'contains many bad things' improved to 'contain many harmful ingredients'.

× Actually I often listening when I was a child because when I was a child my mom always gave me the snakes.

✓ Actually, I often listened to music when I was a child because my mom always gave me snacks.

'Often listening' is incorrect here; use past simple 'listened' or 'often listened to' to match past time reference 'when I was a child'. Also 'gave me the snakes' uses wrong noun and unnecessary article; use 'gave me snacks'.

× For me is to relax and take care when her mom is busy.

✓ For me, it was a way to relax and be cared for when my mom was busy.

Pronouns and possessives are confused: 'her mom' should be 'my mom' because speaker refers to their own mother; 'is to relax and take care' is ungrammatical—use 'to relax and be cared for' to convey passive reception of care. Tense changed to past to match context.

× I thinks I like healthy snakes because it's a good for my health and is actually is healthiest and is help me under my Wellness.

✓ I think I like healthy snacks because they are good for my health; they are actually the healthiest and help me maintain my well-being.

Use 'think' not 'thinks' for first person. 'Snakes' should be 'snacks'. 'It's a good' should be 'they are good' to match plural. Use 'the healthiest' for superlative with 'actually' and 'help me maintain my well-being' is a natural phrasing. Also correct 'under my Wellness' to 'maintain my well-being'.