Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., “watching a movie,” not “washed on Netflix smoothie”). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks once a week, typically at the weekend when I watch a movie at home. For example, last Saturday I watched a film on Netflix and ate some potato chips while relaxing.

Sugestão: Respond directly with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and examples. Use linking words like ‘however’ or ‘therefore’ correctly and avoid incomplete phrases. Be specific about what ‘healthy snacks’ are (e.g., low-sugar, high-fiber, nuts).

Exemplo: I don't think most snacks are healthy; however, I try to choose better options. For example, I buy low-sugar yogurt, nuts, or whole-grain crackers because they are more nutritious and keep me full longer.

Sugestão: Use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words. Start with a clear past-tense statement about your childhood, then contrast with the present using linking words like ‘but’ or ‘however’. Keep sentences short and specific.

Exemplo: Yes, I ate snacks often when I was young. But as I grew older I realized they were unhealthy, so I now eat them less often and only sometimes when I watch a movie at home.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the snack, then explain why with specific vocabulary (e.g., ‘dark chocolate,’ ‘high cocoa content,’ ‘low sugar’). Avoid repetitive phrases and grammar errors like ‘more healthier.’ Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I like eating dark chocolate with a high cocoa content, such as 70–90% cocoa. I prefer it because it contains less sugar than milk or white chocolate and tastes richer, so it feels like a healthier treat.

× I usually eat snacks once a week during weekend when I was watching movie at home.

✓ I usually eat snacks once a week on weekends when I watch movies at home.

The sentence mixes present habit with past continuous. Use simple present for habitual actions (watch -> watch). Use 'on weekends' for recurring weekends and plural 'movies' and include article 'a' before 'movie' if singular. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habits and use correct preposition 'on weekends'.

× For example in last weekend on Saturday I washed on Netflix smoothie while eating chips and.

✓ For example, last weekend on Saturday I watched a movie on Netflix while eating chips.

'Washed' is incorrect verb; context needs 'watched' (past simple). 'In last weekend' should be 'last weekend'. 'On Netflix' modifies watched; 'smoothie' is unrelated and likely typo. Remove stray 'and'. Ensure past simple for a completed action.

× I think it's not healthy for me to eat snacks, but however, I need to choose some snacks that were healthy.

✓ I think it's not healthy for me to eat snacks; however, I need to choose some snacks that are healthy.

'Were' is past tense and wrong for a general present truth. Use present 'are'. Also 'but however' is redundant; use 'however' or 'but'. Use consistent present tense when stating general facts.

× For example, we can go to a supermarket to buy some healthy snacks such as low sugar or high.

✓ For example, we can go to a supermarket to buy some healthy snacks, such as low-sugar options or snacks high in protein.

The sentence is incomplete and vague ('high' what?). Provide a clear noun phrase after 'high' (e.g., 'high in protein'). Use hyphen in 'low-sugar' as a compound adjective. Maintain parallel structure in examples.

× I often eat snacks when I was young, but when I was when I grew older, I think snacks is not healthy at all, so I tried to eat less Sir than before.

✓ I often ate snacks when I was young, but as I grew older, I thought snacks were not healthy at all, so I tried to eat less than before.

Mixing present and past: use past 'ate' and 'thought' for past habits. 'When I was when I grew older' is redundant; use 'as I grew older'. 'Snacks is' violates subject-verb agreement; plural 'snacks' takes 'were' in past. Remove 'Sir' and fix 'less than before'.

× However, sometimes I would still eat snacks when I'm watching a movie at home.

✓ However, sometimes I still eat snacks when I'm watching a movie at home.

Use simple present 'still eat' for habitual present actions; 'would still eat' implies conditional or past habit. Keep present progressive 'I'm watching' for the ongoing action while using present for the habitual behavior.

× I love to eat 100% chocolate right now because it has low sugar levels than other chocolates than other white chocolates and I think it is more healthier eating dark chocolates with high cocoa level inside it so.

✓ I love eating 100% dark chocolate right now because it has lower sugar levels than other chocolates, especially white chocolate, and I think it is healthier to eat dark chocolate with a high cocoa content.

Problems: '100% chocolate' should be '100% dark chocolate'; 'has low sugar levels than' needs comparative 'lower ... than'. Remove duplicated phrase 'than other'. 'More healthier' is redundant; use 'healthier'. Use 'high cocoa content' instead of 'high cocoa level inside it'. Use gerund 'eating' or 'love eating' for preference.