Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct word choice; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler ("uh"), use correct time expressions and link reasons with a cohesive connector. Keep to 2–3 sentences. Add a little specific detail about types of snacks or routine to enrich the answer.

Exemplo: I usually have a snack in the early evening after I finish work. I moved my main snack from midday to around 4:00 PM so I don’t get hungry later and it’s my little pleasure after a busy day.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with a supporting reason and a brief example. Avoid vague phrases and unfinished thoughts. Use linking words (for example, however) to contrast healthy and unhealthy snacks, and be specific about what makes a snack healthy.

Exemplo: I think snacks can be healthy if they contain nutrients like protein and fiber. For example, homemade yogurt with fruit is nutritious, however packaged chips and soda are unhealthy because they are high in sugar and salt.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a topic sentence and then give one specific supporting detail. Correct grammar (tense and phrasing) and avoid redundancy. Mention frequency and one clear reason linked to the example.

Exemplo: Yes, I snacked a lot as a child because my father owned a restaurant. For instance, I often ate chow mein and other dishes from the restaurant, so snacking became a regular habit.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give one or two specific examples and add a brief reason. Avoid repeating words ("always") and use correct plural forms and article use. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually prefer junk food, especially when I go out with friends after a walk. For example, we often share pizza or fries because these foods satisfy my cravings and are easy to eat while socializing.

× I eat snacks right now at evening PM after I finish all my work.

✓ I eat snacks in the evening after I finish all my work.

Incorrect time expression and redundancy: 'right now' conflicts with habitual present; 'at evening PM' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'in the evening' for time of day and simple present for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'I eat snacks in the evening after I finish all my work.'

× Uh, earlier I used to eat at midday at 12:00 PM but I have shifted that to 4:00 PM so that I don't get hungry over the day and it is like my pleasure time.

✓ Earlier I used to eat at midday (12:00 PM), but I shifted that to 4:00 PM so I don't get hungry during the day and it is my pleasure time.

Mixed tense and awkward preposition: 'used to' correctly indicates past habit, but 'have shifted' mixes present perfect with past context; 'over the day' is incorrect preposition, use 'during the day'. Also 'it is like my pleasure time' is informal; 'it is my pleasure time' is clearer. Suggestion: keep past form 'shifted' and use 'during the day.'

× Some snacks can be homemade and made of vitamins, protein etcetera.

✓ Some snacks can be homemade and made with vitamins and protein, etc.

Word choice and preposition: 'made of' usually describes materials; for nutrients use 'made with'. Also include 'and' before the last item and use comma before 'etc.' Suggestion: use 'made with' when listing ingredients or nutrients.

× While some days it can be junk food like chips, coke.

✓ Other days it can be junk food, like chips and Coke.

Incorrect connector and capitalization: 'While some days' is awkward; use 'Other days' to contrast. 'Coke' is a brand name and should be capitalized. Include conjunction 'and' in list. Suggestion: use 'Other days it can be junk food, like chips and Coke.'

× So sometimes it is like to be balanced of what?

✓ So sometimes I try to balance what I eat.

Unclear and ungrammatical phrasing: 'it is like to be balanced of what?' is not grammatical. Express the intended meaning with subject and verb: 'I try to balance what I eat.' Suggestion: state the subject and action clearly.

× Yes, a lot.

✓ Yes, I ate a lot.

Fragment and missing verb: response 'Yes, a lot.' lacks a verb and is unclear in past context. Use complete past-tense sentence 'I ate a lot.' Suggestion: provide full sentence matching question about past habits.

× My father owns a restaurant business so I tend to eat lots of snacks like chow Mein, which is typical Indian food.

✓ My father owns a restaurant, so I tended to eat lots of snacks like chow mein, which is typical Chinese-Indian fusion food.

Tense and cultural accuracy: question asked about past habit, so use past 'tended'. 'Chow mein' is usually Chinese or Indo-Chinese, not typically Indian; adjust description accordingly. Also use comma before 'so'. Suggestion: match past tense and correct food origin.

× So I was a habit snack eater when I was in childhood.

✓ So I had the habit of snacking when I was a child.

Awkward word order and article use: 'was a habit snack eater' is ungrammatical. Use 'had the habit of snacking' or 'I snacked a lot as a child.' Also 'in childhood' should be 'as a child.' Suggestion: use natural expression 'I had the habit of snacking when I was a child.'

× I prefer junk food over healthy meals.

✓ I prefer junk food to healthy meals.

Incorrect preposition: use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A over B' in formal English. Suggestion: say 'prefer X to Y.'

× I always go out with friends after I complete my walk and always go to some kind of cafe or restaurant and then order the menus like pizza, popcorn, French fry which fulfills my hunger and cravings.

✓ I always go out with friends after my walk and go to a cafe or restaurant, then order items like pizza, popcorn, and French fries, which satisfy my hunger and cravings.

Run-on sentence and pluralization: avoid repeating 'always' and simplify structure. Use 'after my walk' not 'after I complete my walk' for natural phrasing. 'Order the menus' is wrong; use 'order items' or 'order from the menu.' 'French fry' should be plural 'French fries.' 'Fulfill' is awkward for hunger; use 'satisfy.' Suggestion: break into clearer clauses, correct plural forms, and use natural verbs.