Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复使用“a lot of”，并且可以更直接地表达观点。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person now because through extensive practice and preparing for many exams, I have gradually developed more patience.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确指出让你不耐烦的具体原因，并使用连接词。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I face tasks that I am not good at, such as managing difficult situations, because I find it hard to improve in these areas.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，建议使用更准确的表达，并用连接词清晰区分不同情况。

Exemplo: When I work on something I love or am interested in, I am very patient and try my best to succeed. However, if the task is difficult, I may struggle to finish it and feel quite depressed.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确说明工作内容和耐心的重要性。

Exemplo: Yes, as a journalist, I need to write many articles and conduct interviews to find the truth. This requires me to be patient when collecting and verifying data.

Sugestão: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，建议使用正确时态并简洁表达对比。

Exemplo: Of course, I was not patient as a child because I disliked studying many subjects and taking exams. However, during junior high school, I had to prepare for college entrance exams, which helped me become more patient.

× I think the board fee or something that I'm not good at might makes me feel impatient

✓ I think the board fee or something that I'm not good at might make me feel impatient

动词make在这里与情态动词might连用，情态动词后应接动词原形，因此makes应改为make。

× I might very patient to prepare them and try my best to achieve them the best.

✓ I might be very patient to prepare them and try my best to achieve the best.

这里缺少动词be，且使用了复数them指代不明确，应改为the best。

× I might struggle in finish it and feel lot of depressed.

✓ I might struggle to finish it and feel a lot of depression.

动词finish前应使用不定式to finish；feel后应接名词a lot of depression，而不是形容词depressed。

× I'm a my majority is journalism so I need to write lot of articles or make many interviews to make find the truth

✓ My major is journalism so I need to write a lot of articles or conduct many interviews to find the truth

major拼写错误，lot前应加冠词a，make interviews表达不当，应改为conduct interviews，make find the truth结构错误，应改为find the truth。

× when I was young, I'm not a patient students because I hate to study lots of subjects and finish inner examination.

✓ When I was young, I was not a patient student because I hated to study lots of subjects and finish inner examinations.

时态应保持一致，过去时态；students应为单数student；hate应改为过去式hated；examination应为复数examinations。

× when I was in junior high school, I have to prepare for the examination to get to the college, so I become patient from there on.

✓ When I was in junior high school, I had to prepare for the examination to get to college, so I became patient from there on.

时态应为过去时，have to改为had to，become改为became；get to the college中the不必要，应为get to college。