Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了耐心的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些句子结构混乱。建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，避免重复和语法错误。

Exemplo: I consider myself a patient person because I learned to draw when I was young. Drawing requires me to sit still for at least three hours, which helped me develop patience.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且有重复。建议简化句子结构，明确表达自己的感受，并注意单词拼写和语法。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when my mom keeps telling me what to do one after another. I don't like being constantly instructed because it makes me feel pressured.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇表达情绪，并注意句子连贯性。

Exemplo: It depends on the task. If I am doing something I enjoy, like drawing, I am happy to spend a long time on it. However, if it's something stressful like an exam, I tend to feel anxious and impatient.

Sugestão: 回答内容较完整，但有语法和重复问题。建议简化句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I am currently a student, so I don't have work experience yet. However, my major, environmental design, requires patience because building digital models on the computer takes a lot of time.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，句子不够流畅。建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now because patience is a skill developed through practice. As a child, I couldn't sit still while eating, but now I can focus for three hours or more.

× I think I'm kind of a patient person because I learning study.

✓ I think I'm kind of a patient person because I am learning to study.

这里动词'learning'需要与助动词'am'连用构成现在进行时，且后面应接不定式'to study'表示学习的动作。

× when I draw a picture, I need to stay in a chair for at least three hours.

✓ when I draw a picture, I need to stay in a chair for at least three hours.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× So it made me became a patient person.

✓ So it made me become a patient person.

动词'made'后应接动词原形，不能用过去式'became'。

× Maybe it's such as when I'm mom just ask me doing something like this and then you need to going to do something like that.

✓ Maybe it's such as when my mom just asks me to do something like this and then I need to go do something like that.

'I'm mom'应为'my mom'，'ask me doing'应为'ask me to do'，'you need to going'应为'I need to go'，修正了代词和动词不定式的用法。

× when I'm mom just ask me doing something like this and then you need to going to do something like that.

✓ when my mom just asks me to do something like this and then I need to go do something like that.

主语是第三人称单数'my mom'，动词应加's'变为'asks'。

× When she always tell me what I should do, I will get very impatient.

✓ When she always tells me what I should do, I get very impatient.

'she'为第三人称单数，动词应为'tells'，且一般现在时中不宜用将来时'will get'，改为一般现在时。

× I don't want anyone tell me what I should do if this if this happened, I will be very impassioned.

✓ I don't want anyone to tell me what I should do. If this happens, I will be very impatient.

'tell'前应加不定式'to'，'if this if this happened'重复且时态不当，改为'if this happens'，'impassioned'用词错误，应为'impatient'表示不耐烦。

× I think it's it's depend on what the theme is.

✓ I think it depends on what the theme is.

主语是第三人称单数'it'，动词应加's'变为'depends'。

× If the scene is like drawing the scene I love I would very happy to do it for a long time.

✓ If the scene is like drawing the scene I love, I would be very happy to do it for a long time.

缺少动词'be'，应为'would be very happy'。

× But if The thing is the exam and I'm anxiety or anxiety or afraid of it, I will be felt impatient.

✓ But if the thing is the exam and I'm anxious or afraid of it, I will feel impatient.

'anxiety'是名词，形容词应为'anxious'，'will be felt'用法错误，应为'will feel'。

× I'm currently I'm just a student so I haven't had any experience in working but I think my major needs I to be patient because my major is environmental design and I need to build a digital model in the in the computer so it need a lot of time.

✓ I'm currently just a student so I haven't had any experience working, but I think my major requires me to be patient because my major is environmental design and I need to build a digital model on the computer so it needs a lot of time.

'experience in working'改为'experience working'更自然，'needs I to be patient'应为'requires me to be patient'，'in the computer'应为'on the computer'，'it need'应为'it needs'。

× so it need a lot of time.

✓ so it needs a lot of time.

主语是第三人称单数'it'，动词应加's'。

× I think yes, I'm more patient now because I think patient is an ability that build up by your practice.

✓ I think yes, I'm more patient now because I think patience is an ability that is built up by your practice.

'patient'应为名词'patience'，'build up'应为被动语态'is built up'，'your'改为'one's'或保持'your'视语境。

× When I was child I was impatient because I can't stay in my chair while I eating.

✓ When I was a child I was impatient because I couldn't stay in my chair while I was eating.

'was child'应为'was a child'，'can't'应为过去式'couldn't'，'I eating'应为'was eating'。

× I was go around and working but now I can take 3 hours or more.

✓ I used to go around and work but now I can sit for 3 hours or more.

'was go around'语法错误，改为'used to go around'，'working'改为'work'，'take 3 hours'改为'sit for 3 hours'更符合语境。