Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较长且重复，建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I often listen carefully to others and try to understand their views. Also, my major in mathematical finance requires me to analyze complex data, which demands a lot of patience.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用更简洁的句子，明确表达原因，并避免重复。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when someone talks loudly while I'm trying to relax, or when I have to wait for a long time without any explanation.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: If I'm interested in the task, I feel relaxed and focused, doing my best. However, if I find it boring, I think it's a waste of time and feel frustrated.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的动词形式。

Exemplo: Yes, my major in financial mathematics requires me to analyze statistics and data carefully, so I need to be patient.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用连贯的句子表达对比，并避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I would cry and shout if I had to wait, but now I am more understanding and calm.

× I usually be patient to listen to others and try to understand them and my study is mathematical finance and I always have to analyze things and it always need need me to be patient.

✓ I am usually patient to listen to others and try to understand them, and my study is mathematical finance. I always have to analyze things and it always needs me to be patient.

句中“I usually be patient”中的“be”应改为“am”，因为主语是第一人称单数，谓语动词应使用am。句中“it always need need me”中“need”重复且缺少第三人称单数形式，应改为“needs”。

× If someone talked aloud and I want to relax and climb down and she always bother me and makes me annoyed then I will feel impatient and someone that let me wait a lot and and keeps me.

✓ If someone talks aloud and I want to relax and calm down, and she always bothers me and makes me annoyed, then I will feel impatient. Also, if someone lets me wait a lot and keeps me waiting.

句中“If someone talked aloud”应使用一般现在时“talks”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。动词“bother”应加第三人称单数形式“bothers”。“climb down”用词不当，应改为“calm down”。“someone that let me wait”中“let”应为第三人称单数“lets”。

× If I'm interested in these things I would feel relax and I will concentrate on it and pay attention to it to do my best.

✓ If I'm interested in these things, I would feel relaxed and I will concentrate on them and pay attention to them to do my best.

“feel relax”中“relax”应为形容词“relaxed”，表示感受状态。代词“it”应改为复数“them”，与“things”保持一致。

× But if this thing I feel boring then I will think it's a waste of time and I will feel like reckless and annoyed.

✓ But if this thing is boring, then I will think it's a waste of time and I will feel reckless and annoyed.

“I feel boring”应改为“this thing is boring”，因为“boring”描述事物特性。短语“feel like reckless”用法错误，应去掉“like”，直接用“feel reckless”。

× Yes, because I'm major in financial mathematics and I my subjects usually inquires me to analyze the statistics or read more data to fit the work, so I have to be patient.

✓ Yes, because I major in financial mathematics and my subjects usually require me to analyze statistics or read more data to fit the work, so I have to be patient.

“I'm major in”应改为“I major in”，因为“major”是动词。动词“inquires”用错，应为“require”，且主语“subjects”是复数，动词应为“require”。

× Yes, I think I'm more patient now than I was a child because when I was young.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient now than I was as a child because when I was young.

“than I was a child”缺少介词“as”，应为“than I was as a child”，表示比较身份。

× If something that need need me to wait long, I will immediately burst into crying and shouting, but now I am more patient and understanding.

✓ If something needs me to wait long, I would immediately burst into crying and shouting, but now I am more patient and understanding.

“need need”重复，应改为“needs”，主语“something”是第三人称单数。条件句中时态应与上下文一致，使用虚拟语气“would”。