Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person most of the time. For instance, when I am happy, I can wait calmly without getting upset. However, if I feel angry, I might lose patience quickly.

Sugestão: 回答内容不完整，句子不连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并补充完整的观点。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I attend lectures that lack clear points. For example, if the tutor keeps talking without providing useful information, I find it hard to stay focused.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，使用连接词，并具体说明感受。

Exemplo: When I do something I enjoy, like watching movies or doing homework, I feel happy even if it takes a long time. However, if the task is boring, such as searching for information online, I get frustrated quickly.

Sugestão: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意时态和词形变化，使用更准确的词汇。

Exemplo: Definitely yes. As an undergraduate student, I often have to read difficult textbooks and articles. I need to be patient and focus to understand them by reading multiple times.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但语法和表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now. When I was a child, I studied piano for about four years, but I often felt frustrated and cried because I lacked patience. Now, I can practice piano for three hours without feeling tired.

× I'm a patient people, to be honest, my emotions depend on if I was a patient person.

✓ I'm a patient person, to be honest, my emotions depend on if I am a patient person.

people 是复数，不能用来指代单数的我，应该用 person。这里还涉及时态问题，后半句应使用现在时。

× But if there are something I felt very angry, Please don't ask me any question because I may.

✓ But if there is something, I feel very angry. Please don't ask me any questions because I may.

something 是不可数单数，应该用 there is 而不是 there are。questions 应该用复数形式。

× In this lecture the tutor is keep talking and and writing something in the blackboard, but there are not any clear points.

✓ In this lecture the tutor keeps talking and writing something on the blackboard, but there are no clear points.

keep 后面应该用动词的第三人称单数形式 keeps。写在黑板上用 on the blackboard。否定句中用 no 而不是 not any。

× So it's very meaningless for me. It makes me.

✓ So it's very meaningless for me. It makes me feel frustrated.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，需补充完整表达。

× such as watch some interesting movies or do my homework, OK, I feel it's fun.

✓ such as watching some interesting movies or doing my homework, OK, I feel it's fun.

动词后接动名词形式表示习惯或一般情况。

× such as look for the look for the access from the Internet, oh, it's very terrible for me.

✓ such as looking for access on the Internet, oh, it's very terrible for me.

look for 后面不需要重复，access 是不可数名词，前面不加 the，使用介词 on the Internet。

× As an undergraduate student, I always need to read some textbook or articles which is difficult for me to understand it.

✓ As an undergraduate student, I always need to read some textbooks or articles which are difficult for me to understand.

textbook 应用复数 textbooks，与 articles 一致。关系代词 which 指代复数，谓语用 are。句尾不需要 it。

× I must pay more attention and patient to read it over and over again.

✓ I must pay more attention and be patient to read it over and over again.

attention 是名词，patient 是形容词，需用 be patient 结构。

× So as a student I need more patient.

✓ So as a student I need more patience.

patient 是形容词，名词形式是 patience，表示耐心。

× I remember when I was a child, I study how to play piano for about four years, and during that time I feel very terrible because I have no patience to practice how to play it.

✓ I remember when I was a child, I studied how to play the piano for about four years, and during that time I felt very terrible because I had no patience to practice playing it.

回忆过去的动作，动词应使用过去时 studied, felt, had。practice 后接动名词 playing。

× I always cry, but nowadays I can play the piano for three hours.

✓ I always cried, but nowadays I can play the piano for three hours.

前半句描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时 cried。