Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a people”应为“a person”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达自己的感受。

Exemplo: Not really. I wish I were more patient, but I find tasks involving words and numbers quite frustrating because of my ADHD symptoms.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，如“annoys”应为“annoy”，句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明原因。

Exemplo: I often feel impatient when I can't understand complex words or numbers. Also, some people's behavior can annoy me, which makes me lose patience.

Sugestão: 表达不够准确，语法错误明显，如“feel boring”应为“feel bored”，句子结尾不完整。建议使用正确的形容词和完整句子表达感受。

Exemplo: At first, I feel excited to try something new, but as time passes, I get bored and impatient because I lose interest.

Sugestão: 词汇使用错误，“patients”应为“patience”，句子表达不清晰。建议注意词汇拼写，明确表达工作内容和耐心的关系。

Exemplo: As a student, I need a lot of patience to read essays and academic reports, but I manage to do it well.

Sugestão: 语法错误严重，如“a children”应为“a child”，“have”应为“had”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确时态和单复数形式。

Exemplo: I don't think I am more patient now. When I was a child, I was more patient because I wasn't exposed to electronic devices that distract me.

× As a people who have some symptoms of ADHD, the word tasks and number tasks really annoys me.

✓ As a person who has some symptoms of ADHD, word tasks and number tasks really annoy me.

“people”是复数形式，前面用的是单数冠词“a”，应改为单数“person”。“word tasks”和“number tasks”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“annoy”。

× Sometimes some people really annoys me, makes me feel impatient too.

✓ Sometimes some people really annoy me, make me feel impatient too.

主语“some people”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“annoy”和“make”。

× At first I would be so excited to try something new but as time goes by I will feel boring and impatient with it since I find something boring yet.

✓ At first I would be so excited to try something new but as time goes by I will feel bored and impatient with it since I find it boring.

“feel boring”应改为“feel bored”，因为“feel”后面接形容词表示感受时用“bored”表示感到无聊。句尾“find something boring yet”表达不清，改为“find it boring”更准确。

× As a student, reading essays and academic reports involves many patients, but I can do it well.

✓ As a student, reading essays and academic reports involves much patience, but I can do it well.

“patients”是“病人”的意思，错误使用，应为“patience”（耐心），且“many”用于可数名词，“patience”是不可数名词，应使用“much”。

× I don't think so, when I was a children I have more patience in everything since I don't since I didn't been exposed to electronic items which distract me a lot.

✓ I don't think so, when I was a child I had more patience in everything since I hadn't been exposed to electronic items which distract me a lot.

“children”是复数，前面用的是单数“a”，应改为单数“child”。时态应统一，过去时用“had”和“hadn't been”。