Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like "UMM" and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when supporting friends or family during emotional times. For example, I stay calm and empathetic to help them feel understood and supported.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by avoiding fillers and providing clearer, more specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and make your response more coherent.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I don't see immediate results in my personal development. For instance, I schedule many calls to improve myself, but waiting for progress can be frustrating.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but try to avoid fillers and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, aim for more natural phrasing and concise sentences.

Exemplo: I feel enthusiastic and determined because I always finish what I start. Therefore, I make sure every task is completed properly.

Sugestão: Good answer with relevant details. To improve, try to combine sentences using linking words for better coherence and avoid minor grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because many clients are vulnerable and have faced difficult situations. Therefore, I need to remain calm and supportive during daily interactions.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and check verb tenses for accuracy.

Exemplo: Yes, I am much more patient now than when I was a child because I used to be impatient even with small things. However, starting my full-time job and taking on more responsibilities has helped me develop greater patience.

× I would say that I am a really patient person, especially when it comes to situation.

✓ I would say that I am a really patient person, especially when it comes to situations.

The word 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because the speaker is referring to situations in general, not a single specific situation. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about general cases or multiple instances.

× I think this changed as I started my full time job, as I taken more responsibilities and my job has changed me greatly.

✓ I think this changed as I started my full time job, as I took more responsibilities and my job has changed me greatly.

The verb 'taken' is the past participle form and requires an auxiliary verb (e.g., 'have taken') to be correct. Since the sentence is in simple past tense, the correct past tense form 'took' should be used here to maintain tense consistency.