Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu word choice o natural na. Apni 'so much patience' er bodole 'very patient' bolte paren. Sentence gulo ke aro shoja o natural korte hobe. Apni example diye bhalo kore bujhan, kintu linking word use koren na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke logically connect korte.

Exemplo: Yes, I am a patient person, especially when I teach children. For example, when my students make silly mistakes, I try to stay calm because they are still learning. Therefore, I always remind myself to be patient with them.

Sugestão: Apnar answer incomplete ar kichu grammar error ache. Apni 'I am really hate' er bodole 'I really hate' bolben. Apni sentence gulo ke shesh korte hobe, ar linking word use kore answer ke aro logical korte hobe. Apni specific example dite paren jate answer bhalo hoy.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I talk to someone who is not interested and shows attitude. This behavior annoys me a lot. However, I try to stay patient because losing temper is not helpful.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e filler words (uh) beshi, jar karone answer natural lage na. Apni sentence gulo ke shoja o shanghatito korte hobe. Apni specific karon o supporting details dite paren. Linking word use koren jate answer logical hoy.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time because I prefer tasks to be precise and clear. Therefore, long tasks become difficult for me to handle patiently.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu word choice o natural na. 'I'd request a a lot of patience' er bodole 'My job requires a lot of patience' bolben. Apni sentence gulo ke aro shoja o logical korte hobe. Apni supporting details clear kore bolun.

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I tutor children. They often like to talk and have fun, which can be distracting. However, I try to stay calm and focused during lessons.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e grammar error ache, 'I were a child' er bodole 'I was a child' bolben. Apni sentence gulo ke shoja o complete korte hobe. Apni supporting details dite paren jate answer bhalo hoy. Linking word use koren jate answer logical hoy.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. I have learned to control my emotions and be calm with others. As a result, I can handle situations more patiently.

× sometimes I am so much patience with my students

✓ sometimes I am very patient with my students

The word 'patience' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'I'. The correct adjective is 'patient'. Also, 'so much' is not used with adjectives; 'very' is appropriate here.

× they are doing really silly types of mistakes

✓ they are making really silly mistakes

The phrase 'types of mistakes' is unnecessary and awkward. 'Making mistakes' is the correct collocation. Also, 'doing mistakes' is incorrect; 'making mistakes' is the proper expression.

× I cannot lose my mind with them

✓ I cannot lose my mind over them

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'over' when expressing losing one's mind about something or someone.

× if I talk to a person and they are not really interested and they are giving me attitude that makes me impatient

✓ if I talk to a person and they are not really interested and give me attitude, that makes me impatient

The phrase 'they are giving me attitude' is awkward; 'give me attitude' is more natural. Also, the sentence is long and can be improved by removing unnecessary 'are'.

× I am really hate this kind of things

✓ I really hate these kinds of things

The verb 'hate' should not be used with 'am' here; 'I really hate' is correct. Also, 'this kind of things' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of things' to agree in number.

× And additionally I try to keep patient but I.

✓ Additionally, I try to be patient, but I find it difficult.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb after 'but I'. Also, 'keep patient' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'be patient'.

× if I had to, uh, do something for a long time, that would be a very difficult job for me

✓ if I have to do something for a long time, that is a very difficult job for me

The sentence is about a present or general situation, so present tense 'have' and 'is' should be used instead of past tense 'had' and 'would be'.

× I'd request a a lot of patience because as I said before

✓ It requires a lot of patience because, as I said before

'I'd request a a lot of patience' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'It requires a lot of patience' to refer to the job.

× they are really you know, children's really like to do fun talking so much

✓ they are really, you know, children who really like to have fun talking a lot

The phrase 'children's really like' is incorrect; it should be 'children who really like'. Also, 'do fun talking' is unnatural; 'have fun talking' is better.

× I don't like this kind of things, but I try to cool my mind

✓ I don't like these kinds of things, but I try to calm my mind

'This kind of things' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of things' to match plural. Also, 'cool my mind' is not idiomatic; 'calm my mind' is correct.

× I believe I am a more patient person now rather than I was. I were a child.

✓ I believe I am a more patient person now than I was when I was a child.

The phrase 'I were a child' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I was a child'. Also, 'rather than' is better replaced with 'than' in comparisons.

× Now I am really making progress in my mind and try to be patient, be cool with people and make them feel.

✓ Now I am really making progress in my mindset and trying to be patient, be calm with people, and make them feel comfortable.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Be cool with people' is informal and unclear; 'be calm with people' is better. Also, 'make them feel' needs an object, such as 'comfortable'.