Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid irrelevant details like 'last week I went to my university campus' which do not support your point. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then support it with relevant examples or reasons using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because teaching children requires a lot of patience. For instance, when students struggle to understand a topic, I calmly explain it multiple times until they grasp it.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear expressions like 'any disgraceful'. Try to use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Several things make me feel impatient, especially when I am under stress. For example, if something embarrassing happens, I find it hard to stay calm and patient.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to combine your ideas more effectively and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your points with better vocabulary.

Exemplo: I usually feel bored and exhausted when I have to work on projects or assignments for a long time, especially if the deadline is very close.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but contains grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and pronouns, and try to make your sentences more concise and clear with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, my job as a teacher definitely requires patience. A teacher must be caring and explain lessons calmly so that students can understand easily.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has repetition and some grammatical errors. Avoid repeating phrases like 'as I as I' and use past tense correctly. Use linking words to make your answer smoother.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. My mother told me that I was very stubborn before, but I have changed this habit as I grew up.

× There are many reasons that makes me feel impatient.

✓ There are many reasons that make me feel impatient.

The subject 'reasons' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.

× That's mainly stress.

✓ That's mainly stress.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× if there is any disgraceful at that moment I am not able to make myself patient.

✓ if there is any disgraceful thing at that moment I am not able to make myself patient.

The word 'disgraceful' is an adjective and cannot stand alone as a noun; adding 'thing' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I feel really bored when I have to do something for a long time, it's kind of project work or assignments.

✓ I feel really bored when I have to do something for a long time, like project work or assignments.

The phrase 'it's kind of project work or assignments' is awkward; replacing it with 'like project work or assignments' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× he have to give lecture in a very calm way that students should understand.

✓ he has to give lectures in a very calm way so that students can understand.

The subject 'he' requires the verb 'has' (third person singular). Also, 'lecture' should be plural 'lectures' to match the context, and 'so that' is better conjunction here.

× So I think patient is very needed for my job.

✓ So I think patience is very necessary for my job.

'Patient' is an adjective; the noun form 'patience' is needed here. Also, 'very needed' is incorrect; 'very necessary' is the correct phrase.