Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'wait' multiple times and correct minor grammar errors like 'per patient person' to 'a patient person'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when waiting for someone who is late. For instance, I can wait calmly for over an hour without getting angry. This shows that I can remain composed in such situations.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words like 'because' or 'when' to explain reasons. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity.

Exemplo: I usually feel impatient when I have to repeat simple instructions multiple times because it can be frustrating. However, I try to stay calm even if the other person does not understand immediately.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and coherent. Use linking words such as 'although' or 'however' to connect contrasting ideas. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague expressions like 'when I am lost'.

Exemplo: I find doing something for a long time quite tedious and exhausting; however, I usually motivate myself to stay energetic and manage to recover quickly.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more structured and formal. Avoid filler words like 'like' and repetition such as 'be a be a'. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and try to use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because as a teacher and tutor, I often work with energetic children who find it hard to stay still. Therefore, I need to manage my emotions and maintain control.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity and naturalness.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to get annoyed easily, especially when waiting for others. However, over time, I have learned to adapt and be more tolerant.

× Maybe it's a good sign of me as a per patient person.

✓ Maybe it's a good sign of me as a patient person.

The word 'per patient' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'patient'. The error is a misuse of an adjective form, which falls under singular and plural issues as it affects the form of the word used to describe a noun.

× Usually I will feel like I'm impatient when I have to tell somebody that I have been told from many times like something that I have to repeat and repeat over again and it's just something simple and even if they are not understand, I will try to keep myself calm.

✓ Usually I feel impatient when I have to tell somebody something many times, like something that I have to repeat over and over again, and it's just something simple. Even if they do not understand, I try to keep calm.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. 'I have been told from many times' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to tell somebody something many times'. Also, 'they are not understand' is incorrect; it should be 'they do not understand'. The pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I feel like the patients grows in me with time because like when I was a child I would just feel annoying.

✓ Yes, I feel like patience grows in me with time because when I was a child I would just feel annoyed.

The word 'patients' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'patience'. Also, 'feel annoying' is incorrect; it should be 'feel annoyed' because the subject is experiencing the feeling, not causing it. The preposition 'with' is correctly used here, but the noun and adjective forms are incorrect.

× but I just adapt with it with ages.

✓ but I just adapt to it with age.

The verb 'adapt' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'with'. Also, 'ages' should be singular 'age' when referring to the passage of time. Therefore, the correct phrase is 'adapt to it with age'.