Patience— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you a patient person?
Candidato
Well, I think I'm generally a patient person, but it really depends on the situation. For instance, if someone makes me wait for more than 30 minutes without a good reason, I tend to get frustrated because I value my time and it stops me from doing other important tasks.
Examinador
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Candidato
I feel impatient if I have important thoughts, but uh, I waiting for someone with unnecessary reasons more than 30 minutes, I will feel it is impatient because it will waste my time to prevent me completing important tasks.
Examinador
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Candidato
If the activity is fun and exciting, like public speaking or playing sports, I usually enjoy doing it, even if it takes a long time. I feel motivated because I love the challenge and the experience helped me improve my skill. However, if the task is boring, I might feel tired or impatient after a while.
Examinador
Does your job require you to be patient?
Candidato
Yes, my job requires me to be a patient person. Because I work as an online tutor, I need to manage junior high school students, which can be challenging because it is sometimes difficult to understand their feelings and behavior. Therefore, having a lot of patience is very important in my work.
Examinador
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I didn't really understand other people feelings so I often got impatient easily. However, as I have grown older, I have become more mature and empathetic which help me stay calm and patient in different situations.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan alami, namun Anda bisa membuatnya lebih efektif dengan menghindari pengulangan dan memperjelas kalimat. Misalnya, hindari pengulangan 'because' dan gunakan variasi kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih lancar.
Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person in most situations. However, I get frustrated when someone keeps me waiting for over 30 minutes without a valid reason, as I value my time and it prevents me from completing other important tasks.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa yang mengganggu pemahaman. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung, serta gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban lebih koheren.
Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have important things on my mind but have to wait for someone without a good reason for more than 30 minutes. This wastes my time and stops me from finishing important tasks.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Pontuação: 90.0Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah sangat baik dengan struktur yang jelas dan penggunaan kata penghubung yang tepat. Untuk meningkatkan, Anda bisa menambahkan sedikit variasi kosakata dan memperbaiki kesalahan kecil seperti tense agar lebih tepat.
Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually enjoy it if the activity is fun and exciting, such as public speaking or playing sports. I feel motivated because I love the challenge, and the experience helps me improve my skills. However, if the task is boring, I tend to feel tired or impatient after a while.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Pontuação: 88.0Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas. Namun, Anda bisa menggabungkan kalimat agar lebih efektif dan menghindari pengulangan kata 'because'. Gunakan variasi kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih alami.
Exemplo: Yes, my job as an online tutor requires a great deal of patience since managing junior high school students can be challenging due to the difficulty in understanding their feelings and behavior. Therefore, being patient is essential in my work.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Pontuação: 87.0Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah baik dengan struktur yang jelas dan penggunaan kata penghubung yang tepat. Untuk perbaikan, perhatikan penggunaan bentuk jamak dan singular (misalnya 'people's feelings') serta konsistensi tense agar lebih tepat.
Exemplo: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I didn't really understand other people's feelings, so I often became impatient easily. However, as I have grown older, I have become more mature and empathetic, which helps me stay calm and patient in different situations.
Gramática
× I feel impatient if I have important thoughts, but uh, I waiting for someone with unnecessary reasons more than 30 minutes, I will feel it is impatient because it will waste my time to prevent me completing important tasks.
✓ I feel impatient if I have important thoughts, but uh, I am waiting for someone with unnecessary reasons for more than 30 minutes, I will feel impatient because it wastes my time and prevents me from completing important tasks.
The verb 'waiting' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Also, 'feel it is impatient' is incorrect; 'feel impatient' is the correct expression. Additionally, 'waste my time to prevent me completing' should be 'wastes my time and prevents me from completing' to use correct verb forms and prepositions.
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