Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词形式和词汇的准确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I have an 11-year-old son. Spending time with him requires patience, which helps strengthen our relationship and makes me feel happy and peaceful.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用连贯的句子表达原因，并用具体例子支持，同时注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I am tired and exhausted. For example, after finishing all my homework in the afternoon, I usually need to eat something to regain my energy.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达感受，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: At first, I feel energetic and patient when doing something for a long time. However, if it takes too long and is not finished, I start to feel tired and lose patience.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议使用完整句子，注意动词形式和名词复数形式，清晰表达工作内容和耐心的关系。

Exemplo: Yes, my job in the marketing department requires me to be patient because I communicate with many different customers who have various needs.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议注意形容词和副词的正确形式，简洁表达观点，并用具体原因支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because after many years of work and becoming a mother, I understand that patience improves both my life and work outcomes.

× Yes, because I have a son about 11 years old.

✓ Yes, because I have a son who is about 11 years old.

这里缺少关系代词"who is"来修饰"a son"，使句子完整。

× When I stay with my son I should have enough patient since I have the have patient to my son with me, have the stronger relationship and this will make me feel happy and peaceful.

✓ When I stay with my son, I should have enough patience since I have patience for my son with me, have a stronger relationship and this will make me feel happy and peaceful.

"patient"是形容词，表示有耐心，名词形式是"patience"，此处应使用名词。"the stronger relationship"前缺少冠词"a"。

× For example, when I came from the whole homework at the afternoon, at this time, I need to eat something to make myself become energy.

✓ For example, when I came back from all the homework in the afternoon, at this time, I need to eat something to make myself energetic.

"came from the whole homework"表达不正确，应为"came back from all the homework"。"at the afternoon"应为"in the afternoon"。"become energy"应改为"become energetic"，形容词形式。

× For example, when I came from the whole homework at the afternoon, at this time, I need to eat something to make myself become energy.

✓ For example, when I came back from all the homework in the afternoon, at this time, I need to eat something to make myself energetic.

介词"at the afternoon"应改为"in the afternoon"，表示时间段。

× I think 1. I feel tired and exhausted at this moment, I may become impatient.

✓ I think 1. I feel tired and exhausted at this moment, so I may become impatient.

句中"1."可能是笔误，且两个分句之间应使用连词"so"连接，改善句子结构。

× I think when I needed to do something at the beginning I feel energy and patient to do the things, but when I insist a long time and this thing did did don't finish at this time, I may be feel tired and.

✓ I think when I need to do something at the beginning, I feel energetic and patient to do the things, but when I persist for a long time and the thing is not finished at this time, I may feel tired.

"needed"应为现在时"need"，"energy"应为形容词"energetic"，"patient"应为名词"patience"或形容词"patient"，"insist a long time"应为"persist for a long time"，"did did don't finish"是重复错误，应为"is not finished"。

× Yes, because I'm working in the market department, this job needed needs me to communication with different kinds of customers and these customers have different kind of. Requires and other thing.

✓ Yes, because I'm working in the marketing department, this job needs me to communicate with different kinds of customers and these customers have different kinds of requirements and other things.

"market department"应为"marketing department"，"needed needs"重复，应为"needs"，"to communication"应为动词不定式"to communicate"，"different kind of"应为复数形式"different kinds of"，"Requires"应为名词复数"requirements"，"thing"应为复数"things"。

× Yes, since I have worked so many years and become a mother, I think I have become more patient because I know when I have enough patient, my life and work will become more and more better and the outcome also become very good.

✓ Yes, since I have worked for so many years and become a mother, I think I have become more patient because I know when I have enough patience, my life and work will become better and better and the outcome will also become very good.

"worked so many years"应加介词"for"，"enough patient"应为名词"enough patience"，"more and more better"是错误比较级，应为"better and better"，"outcome also become"应为"outcome will also become"。