Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'a quite patient person' 대신 'quite a patient person'가 맞으며, 'to kill the time' 보다는 'to pass the time'가 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 중복된 단어('I I')와 어색한 표현('instead of feel annoying')을 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I consider myself quite a patient person because when the subway is delayed, I usually use my smartphone to pass the time instead of feeling annoyed.

Sugestão: 'waiting a long lines'는 'waiting in long lines'로 수정해야 하며, 'being stuck against traffic'는 'being stuck in traffic'이 맞습니다. 'lustrous'는 문맥에 맞지 않는 단어로, 'frustrated'나 'impatient'로 바꾸는 것이 좋습니다. 좀 더 구체적이고 정확한 단어 선택과 문법에 주의하세요.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have to wait for something important, especially if the delay is unexpected. For example, waiting in long lines or being stuck in traffic makes me frustrated because I value my time and want to use it productively.

Sugestão: 답변이 문법적으로 매우 불완전하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함하도록 연습해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 긴 시간 동안 무언가를 할 때 느끼는 감정을 명확히 표현하고, 그 이유를 덧붙이세요.

Exemplo: At first, I feel frustrated when I have to do something for a long time because progress seems slow. However, after achieving my goal, I feel satisfied and proud.

Sugestão: 'promises'는 아마도 'my job'이나 'my profession'을 의미하는 것 같은데, 단어 선택이 잘못되었습니다. 문법적으로도 어색하며, 문장을 명확하게 다시 구성해야 합니다. 직업과 인내심의 관계를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I need to spend a lot of time observing patients carefully.

Sugestão: 'Literally'는 이 문맥에 적절하지 않으며, 'become'은 과거 시제인 'became'으로 바꾸어야 합니다. 또한, 'can't'는 과거 시제에 맞게 'couldn't'로 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 자연스럽고 정확하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I have become a more patient person compared to when I was a child because I used to get upset when I couldn't get what I wanted immediately.

× I think I'm a quite patient person because when I see a delayed subway I I usually use the smartphone to kill the time instead of feel annoying.

✓ I think I'm quite a patient person because when I see a delayed subway, I usually use my smartphone to kill time instead of feeling annoyed.

The adverb 'quite' should be placed before the article 'a' to correctly modify 'patient person'. Also, 'the smartphone' should be 'my smartphone' to indicate possession. 'Kill the time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'kill time'. 'Feel annoying' is incorrect; it should be 'feeling annoyed' because the verb 'feel' needs an adjective, and the gerund form is used after 'instead of'.

× For example, waiting a long lines or being stuck against traffic can make me lustrous because I value my time and want to use it productively.

✓ For example, waiting in long lines or being stuck in traffic can make me frustrated because I value my time and want to use it productively.

'A long lines' is incorrect because 'lines' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'waiting in long lines'. Also, 'being stuck against traffic' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in traffic'. The word 'lustrous' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'frustrated'.

× For example, waiting a long lines or being stuck against traffic can make me lustrous because I value my time and want to use it productively.

✓ For example, waiting in long lines or being stuck in traffic can make me frustrated because I value my time and want to use it productively.

The preposition 'against' is incorrect when referring to traffic; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'waiting a long lines' should be 'waiting in long lines' to correctly express the action.

× For example, waiting a long lines or being stuck against traffic can make me lustrous because I value my time and want to use it productively.

✓ For example, waiting in long lines or being stuck in traffic can make me frustrated because I value my time and want to use it productively.

'Lustrous' is an adjective meaning shiny or glowing and is not appropriate to describe a feeling. The correct adjective to express impatience or annoyance is 'frustrated'.

× At first I would feel frustrated as I as I think the immediately research is not arise but over time after achieving something I.

✓ At first, I would feel frustrated because I think immediate results do not arise, but over time, after achieving something, I feel better.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Immediately research is not arise' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects verb usage and sentence structure.

× Yes, promises to require me to be patient because it requires a lot of time to observe patients.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because it requires a lot of time to observe patients.

'Promises' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'my job'. Also, 'promises to require me' is incorrect verb usage. The pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'my job'.

× Literally I become a more patient person compared to my childhood because when I was younger I used to be upset when I can't get what I need immediately.

✓ Literally, I have become a more patient person compared to my childhood because when I was younger, I used to be upset when I couldn't get what I needed immediately.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have become' to indicate change over time. 'Can't' should be past tense 'couldn't' to match the past context. 'Need' should be 'needed' for consistency in past tense.