Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit repetitive and hesitant with filler words like 'umm'. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. For example, start by stating whether you are patient or not, then explain with a specific example.

Exemplo: I consider myself patient, especially with people I care about. However, I find it harder to be patient with strangers or people I don't get along with, which sometimes makes me act a bit rude.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical errors and hesitation. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your reason with specific details. Avoid filler words and finish your sentences fully.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when someone interrupts me while I'm busy with a task. For instance, if I'm working on an important project and someone starts a conversation, it can be quite frustrating.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete, with filler words. Try to give a clear and complete response with linking words to connect ideas. Provide specific examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: I don't mind spending a long time on activities I enjoy, such as painting or reading. Because I love these hobbies, I stay patient and focused even if they take hours.

Sugestão: Your answer is too brief and does not expand on the topic. Even if you don't have a job, try to explain or relate to the question by talking about situations where patience is needed in your life, such as studying or volunteering.

Exemplo: I don't have a job at the moment, but I believe patience is important in many areas of life, like when studying or helping others.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct grammar and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned that achieving dreams requires patience. Over time, I have noticed my patience has improved significantly.

× One of the things that really make me feel impatient is when someone trying to have a conversation with you, when you are doing something, when you are in the middle of something and umm, it's really makes me feel impatient because I'm quite a fresh person and sometimes I don't really have.

✓ One of the things that really makes me feel impatient is when someone is trying to have a conversation with you, when you are doing something, when you are in the middle of something and umm, it really makes me feel impatient because I'm quite a fresh person and sometimes I don't really have.

The subject 'One of the things' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, 'someone trying' needs the verb 'is' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Additionally, 'it's really makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it really makes' because 'makes' already includes the verb, so 'it's' (it is) is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× One of the things that really make me feel impatient is when someone trying to have a conversation with you, when you are doing something, when you are in the middle of something and umm, it's really makes me feel impatient because I'm quite a fresh person and sometimes I don't really have.

✓ One of the things that really makes me feel impatient is when someone is trying to have a conversation with you, when you are doing something, when you are in the middle of something and umm, it really makes me feel impatient because I'm quite a fresh person and sometimes I don't really have.

The phrase 'someone trying' is missing the auxiliary verb 'is' to correctly form the present continuous tense 'someone is trying'. Without 'is', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× One of the things that really make me feel impatient is when someone trying to have a conversation with you, when you are doing something, when you are in the middle of something and umm, it's really makes me feel impatient because I'm quite a fresh person and sometimes I don't really have.

✓ One of the things that really makes me feel impatient is when someone is trying to have a conversation with you, when you are doing something, when you are in the middle of something and umm, it really makes me feel impatient because I'm quite a fresh person and sometimes I don't really have.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'One of the things'. Also, 'it's really makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it really makes' because 'makes' already functions as the verb, so 'it's' (it is) is redundant and incorrect.

× I would say yes because I gained some understanding that in order to achieve something like your dreams, you need to be more patient. And this is something that I realized for a really long time ago and I quite noticed that my patient is growing on me compared when I was younger when I'm not.

✓ I would say yes because I gained some understanding that in order to achieve something like your dreams, you need to be more patient. And this is something that I realized a really long time ago and I quite noticed that my patience is growing on me compared to when I was younger when I was not.

The phrase 'for a really long time ago' is incorrect; 'a really long time ago' is the correct expression without 'for'. Also, 'compared when I was younger when I'm not' is incorrect; it should be 'compared to when I was younger when I was not' to correctly use the past tense and the preposition 'to' after 'compared'. Additionally, 'patient' should be 'patience' as the noun form is needed here.

× I would say yes because I gained some understanding that in order to achieve something like your dreams, you need to be more patient. And this is something that I realized for a really long time ago and I quite noticed that my patient is growing on me compared when I was younger when I'm not.

✓ I would say yes because I gained some understanding that in order to achieve something like your dreams, you need to be more patient. And this is something that I realized a really long time ago and I quite noticed that my patience is growing on me compared to when I was younger when I was not.

The pronoun 'my patient' is incorrect; it should be 'my patience' because 'patience' is the noun referring to the quality of being patient. Also, 'compared when I was younger when I'm not' is incorrect; it should be 'compared to when I was younger when I was not' to correctly use the preposition 'to' and maintain consistent tense.