Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“not a reputation person”应为“not a patient person”，句子结构不完整。建议注意语法准确性，使用简单且正确的句子表达观点，同时避免重复。

Exemplo: Actually, I'm not a patient person. I often feel angry and annoyed when people do things very slowly. I find it hard to wait for a long time, which I think is one of my weaknesses.

Sugestão: 回答中有一些表达不清和语法错误，如“waiting in long squeeze”应为“waiting in a long queue”，以及“make me recognize”不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达更清晰。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have to wait for something important, especially if the delay is unexpected. For example, waiting in a long queue or being stuck in traffic makes me frustrated because I value my time and dislike wasting it. Also, when conversations take longer than I expect, I feel impatient.

Sugestão: 回答中表达重复且不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免口语化的“you know”，并尝试丰富词汇表达情绪。

Exemplo: I usually feel angry and annoyed when I have to do something for a long time because I lack patience. As a result, I find it hard to control my negative emotions, which I consider one of my main weaknesses.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，如“studying journal”应为“studying journalism”，句子结构混乱。建议注意语法和用词准确，表达更清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, I am currently studying journalism at university. Learning German is difficult, and studying a language requires a lot of patience. Therefore, my studies require me to be patient, and I am making an effort to improve in this area.

Sugestão: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单句表达对比。

Exemplo: I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I often felt annoyed and frustrated if I had to wait for a long time. But now that I have grown up, I can control my emotions better.

× Actually I'm not a reputation person.

✓ Actually I'm not a patient person.

这里'reputation person'是错误的搭配，应该用'patient person'表示'有耐心的人'。这是词汇选择错误，不属于语法错误，但为了表达正确需要改正。

× I always feel angry and annoyed when someone do something very slowly and I don't have patience to.

✓ I always feel angry and annoyed when someone does something very slowly and I don't have patience to.

主语'someone'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'does'。

× I don't have patience to.

✓ I don't have patience to do so.

句子不完整，缺少动词或补语，导致结构错误。应补充完整表达。

× Hold down something for a long time.

✓ Holding on to something for a long time.

该句为不完整的短语，缺少主语和谓语，且表达不准确，应改为完整的动名词短语。

× waiting in long squeeze or being stopped in traffic can make me recognize because I value my time and dislike wasting it.

✓ waiting in a long queue or being stopped in traffic can make me recognize because I value my time and dislike wasting it.

'long squeeze'应为'long queue'，表示排长队。这里是词汇错误，影响表达。

× waiting in long squeeze or being stopped in traffic can make me recognize because I value my time and dislike wasting it.

✓ waiting in a long queue or being stopped in traffic can make me impatient because I value my time and dislike wasting it.

'make me recognize'表达不正确，应为'make me impatient'，表示使我感到不耐烦。

× impatience arises when talks take longer than anticipate, which can be frustrating.

✓ impatience arises when talks take longer than anticipated, which can be frustrating.

'than anticipate'应为' than anticipated'，这里需要过去分词作形容词修饰。

× my job required me to be patient and I'm I'm making effort to be patient.

✓ my job requires me to be patient and I'm making an effort to be patient.

主语'my job'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为'requires'。

× I'm making effort to be patient.

✓ I'm making an effort to be patient.

'effort'前应加不定冠词'an'，表示一次努力。

× So do I pay since now then when I was a child, when I was a child, I can't control myself to feel annoyed and frustrated when something needed, something needs me to wait for a long time.

✓ So do I pay more patience now than when I was a child. When I was a child, I couldn't control myself and felt annoyed and frustrated when something needed me to wait for a long time.

句子结构混乱，时态使用不当。应使用过去时描述过去的情况，且句子应分开表达，语序调整使表达清晰。

× I can't control myself to feel the bad emotions.

✓ I can't control myself from feeling bad emotions.

'control myself to feel'用法错误，应为'control myself from feeling'，表示控制自己不去感受某种情绪。