Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác như "from my opinion" và "the 1st and the former". Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm in difficult situations. For example, when I face challenges at school, I try to remain composed and think carefully before acting.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when people talk about me behind my back or when my family doesn't pay attention to my opinions. These situations make me frustrated because I want to be understood and respected.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "doing calculating" và giải thích rõ hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I usually feel patient when I have to do something for a long time. For example, I enjoy solving math problems because it requires concentration and skill, even though it takes a lot of time.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "assert" và hoàn thiện câu. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: I am currently a student, so I don't have a job. However, my studies require patience because learning new knowledge takes time and practice to apply effectively.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có phần lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh dùng các cụm từ không cần thiết như "like, you know". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have become more mature and understand the importance of staying calm in difficult situations.

× Well from my opinion, I think that I'm a patient person for many reasons and the 1st and the former is would obviously when I can be awake, stay calm whenever there's situations that occur.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I think that I'm a patient person for many reasons and the first and foremost is obviously when I can be awake and stay calm whenever situations occur.

The phrase 'from my opinion' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' as in 'in my opinion'. Also, 'the 1st and the former' should be 'the first and foremost' to express the primary reason. 'There's situations' should be 'there are situations' but this is addressed in another correction. The sentence also needed clearer conjunctions for better flow.

× Well from my opinion, I think that I'm a patient person for many reasons and the 1st and the former is would obviously when I can be awake, stay calm whenever there's situations that occur.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I think that I'm a patient person for many reasons and the first and foremost is obviously when I can be awake and stay calm whenever there are situations that occur.

The phrase 'there's situations' is incorrect because 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular, but 'situations' is plural. The correct form is 'there are situations' to agree in number.

× So I think there are many things that make me become more impatient person.

✓ So I think there are many things that make me become a more impatient person.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'more impatient person'. This is an article error but also relates to prepositional phrase structure. The phrase 'more impatient person' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× So I think it's good including some kind of worship story when my friend talk about me and some kind of, uh, big family don't really consider me.

✓ So I think it's good, including some kind of worship story when my friend talks about me, and some kind of, uh, big family doesn't really consider me.

The verb forms 'talk' and 'don't' do not agree with their singular subjects 'my friend' and 'some kind of big family'. They should be 'talks' and 'doesn't' respectively to match third person singular subjects.

× So I think it's good including some kind of worship story when my friend talk about me and some kind of, uh, big family don't really consider me.

✓ So I think it's good including some kind of worship story when my friend talks about me and some kind of, uh, big family doesn't really consider me.

The verbs 'talk' and 'don't' must be conjugated to 'talks' and 'doesn't' to agree with the singular third person subjects 'my friend' and 'some kind of big family'.

× I would say that I would feel way, right.

✓ I would say that I would feel tired, right.

The phrase 'feel way' is unclear and likely a misuse of a word or preposition. It seems the intended meaning is 'feel tired' or 'feel weary'. The correction replaces 'way' with 'tired' for clarity and correctness.

× I mean for example, when I'm doing calculating, which is a sport including many technique and skill and it takes a lot of time when you do it and I do really enjoy doing it.

✓ I mean, for example, when I'm doing calculations, which is a sport including many techniques and skills, and it takes a lot of time when you do it, and I really enjoy doing it.

The word 'calculating' should be the noun 'calculations' here. Also, 'technique' and 'skill' should be plural 'techniques' and 'skills' to match the plural context. The sentence also needed commas for clarity.

× Currently I'm a student so I don't work but in my study field which is also required patient too because when you study you have to like assert a lot of knowledge over the periods and then have to use it every single.

✓ Currently, I'm a student so I don't work, but in my field of study, which also requires patience, because when you study you have to acquire a lot of knowledge over time and then have to use it every single day.

The phrase 'required patient' is incorrect; it should be 'requires patience' (noun form). 'Assert a lot of knowledge' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'acquire'. 'Over the periods' is vague; 'over time' is more natural. 'Every single' is incomplete; it should be 'every single day' or similar.

× I think it's obvious. Obviously just as I am older, I was like less impatient than when I was younger.

✓ I think it's obvious. Obviously, as I am older, I am less impatient than when I was younger.

The phrase 'I was like less impatient' is incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary and 'was' should be 'am' to match the present tense 'as I am older'. The sentence compares current and past states, so present tense is appropriate for the current state.

× It's because that I feel that I'm being more mature than I was a kid and like, you know, as opposed to the fact I don't.

✓ It's because I feel that I'm more mature than I was as a kid, and, you know, unlike before, I don't.

The phrase 'It's because that' is incorrect; 'because' does not need 'that'. 'Being more mature' is better as 'more mature' for a state. 'As opposed to the fact I don't' is unclear and awkward; 'unlike before, I don't' is clearer. The conjunctions and phrasing needed adjustment for clarity and correctness.