Patience— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you a patient person?
Candidato
Uh, yes, I am, you know, in, in my class, in my class, my like my friend, all always like tell me that I'm a like a nonchalant person like and you know, I don't feel and I don't feel any, uh, frustration when I like wait for any person.
Examinador
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Candidato
I think the key factor that makes makes maybe everyone's to be like patient is learned to like control our mind. You know, I like I'm, I'm always trying to like manage my mind, not to be frustrated.
Examinador
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Candidato
At first when I when I'm when I start to when I start to do to do start doing something that is long, at first I feel really maybe feel don't find a challenge to finish it. But after a little bit time I try to try to lose, I feel like more relaxed and I love it.
Examinador
Does your job require you to be patient?
Candidato
I think yes, it does. You know, I think every job in in the society like always maybe needs their employers become more like patient to like maybe to manage everything in our hand.
Examinador
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Candidato
In, in the past, like when I was a child is very hard to like learn to be patient, but right now and, and I, I mean, so when I roll up, I try to like to be, to control my mind alerts to like finish, uh, some of the maybe very complex and typical tasks that will comes to my mind.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ lặp lại và không mạch lạc, bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, my friends often say that I remain calm and never get frustrated when waiting for others.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh nói vòng vo. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng từ nối để làm rõ ý. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời thêm thuyết phục.
Exemplo: I feel impatient when I cannot control my thoughts. Therefore, I always try to manage my mind to avoid frustration in difficult situations.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên luyện tập nói câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: When I start a long task, I usually find it challenging. However, after some time, I become more relaxed and enjoy completing it.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết và lặp lại. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể nếu có thể.
Exemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I need to manage multiple tasks carefully and calmly.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên luyện tập nói câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.
Exemplo: I was less patient as a child, but now I try to control my mind and stay calm when facing complex tasks.
Gramática
× my like my friend, all always like tell me that I'm a like a nonchalant person like
✓ my friends always tell me that I'm a nonchalant person
The phrase 'all always like tell me' is incorrect because 'all' is unnecessary and 'always' should be used alone to indicate frequency. Also, 'my like my friend' is incorrect; it should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. The word 'like' is overused and unnecessary here. Suggestion: use 'my friends always tell me'.
× I don't feel any, uh, frustration when I like wait for any person
✓ I don't feel any frustration when I wait for anyone
The phrase 'wait for any person' is awkward; 'anyone' is more natural and correct. Also, the filler 'like' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'wait for anyone'.
× makes makes maybe everyone's to be like patient is learned to like control our mind
✓ makes maybe everyone be patient is learning to control our mind
The phrase 'everyone's to be like patient' is incorrect; 'everyone' should be used as a subject without possessive 's'. Also, 'is learned' is incorrect; it should be 'is learning' or 'is learned' replaced with 'learning'. Suggestion: 'everyone be patient is learning to control our mind'.
× I think every job in in the society like always maybe needs their employers become more like patient to like maybe to manage everything in our hand
✓ I think every job in society always needs its employees to become more patient to manage everything in our hands
The phrase 'in in the society' is redundant; 'in society' is sufficient. 'Their employers' is incorrect because jobs do not have employers; 'employees' is correct. 'Become more like patient' should be 'become more patient'. 'In our hand' should be plural 'in our hands'. Suggestion: 'every job in society always needs its employees to become more patient to manage everything in our hands'.
× when I was a child is very hard to like learn to be patient
✓ when I was a child, it was very hard to learn to be patient
The sentence lacks the past tense verb 'was' after 'child' to form a complete clause. 'Is' should be 'was' to match past tense. Also, 'like' is unnecessary. Suggestion: 'when I was a child, it was very hard to learn to be patient'.
× some of the maybe very complex and typical tasks that will comes to my mind
✓ some of the maybe very complex and typical tasks that will come to my mind
The verb 'comes' does not agree with the plural subject 'tasks'. It should be 'come'. Suggestion: 'tasks that will come to my mind'.
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