Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and relevance to the question. Instead of focusing on politeness, directly address your patience level. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually stay calm even in stressful situations and try to understand others' perspectives.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering what makes you feel impatient, use linking words for coherence, and provide specific examples.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I see younger people disrespecting their parents because I believe respect is very important in family relationships.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with clear structure and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples with correct grammar.

Exemplo: It depends on the task and my mood. If I enjoy the activity, like drawing, I don't find it difficult to spend a long time on it.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant words like 'violence' and 'climate'. Focus on how patience is important in your job and explain why, using clear and relevant vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, as an architect, I need to be patient because designing buildings requires careful planning and attention to detail over a long period.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Directly compare your patience now and as a child, and explain with specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions and understand others better as I have grown older.

× Yes, of course, most of the time I'm trying to be a polite and uh, being very good and uh.

✓ Yes, of course, most of the time I try to be polite and, uh, behave very well.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes 'I'm trying to be' and 'being' which is redundant and awkward. Use simple present 'I try to be' to express habitual action and 'behave very well' instead of 'being very good' for correct verb usage.

× I can say many things for feeling patient.

✓ I can say many things about feeling patient.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'about' is the correct preposition to use with 'say many things' when referring to a topic.

× if uh, younger people, uh, say something bad to their parents or older people, I think it's a very impatient and it feels uh, so bad for me.

✓ If younger people say something bad to their parents or older people, I think it's very impolite and it feels so bad to me.

'Impatient' is an adjective describing a feeling of impatience, but here the intended meaning is 'impolite'. Also, 'it's a very impatient' is incorrect; 'impatient' is not a noun. The phrase 'feels so bad for me' should be 'feels so bad to me'.

× For example, if umm, I want to Draw Something, it's take a few times for me.

✓ For example, if I want to draw something, it takes a few times for me.

'Draw' should be in lowercase as it is not a proper noun. 'It's take' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it takes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, of course, as an architect, you should be very polite and you should stay, uh, calmly and pay attention to, uh, your, uh, violence. Your climate.

✓ Yes, of course, as an architect, you should be very patient and stay calm and pay attention to your clients and environment.

'Violence' and 'climate' are incorrect in this context. Likely intended words are 'clients' and 'environment' or 'conditions'. Also, 'stay calmly' should be 'stay calm' as 'calm' is an adjective here.

× Yes, of course, but I think when we were a child we should pay attention and and be polite to our parents or older people.

✓ Yes, of course, but I think when we were children we should pay attention to and be polite to our parents or older people.

'We were a child' is incorrect; the plural 'children' should be used with 'we'. Also, 'pay attention and and be polite' is missing 'to' after 'pay attention' and has a repeated 'and'.

× But nowadays when I'm getting older I should respect to.

✓ But nowadays, as I'm getting older, I should show respect too.

'Respect to' is incorrect; 'respect' is a transitive verb and does not require 'to'. Also, 'too' is the correct word to express 'also' here.