Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I am usually a patient person; however, in situations where I need quick results, I tend to lose my patience because I want things done immediately.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and is incomplete at the end. Try to complete your sentences fully and provide specific examples with clear explanations. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'makes me impatience' and use correct forms.

Exemplo: I usually feel impatient when I need something urgently, depending on my mood. For instance, this morning, I asked my roommate to take pictures of me, but she wasn't doing it well, which made me lose my patience.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and correct phrases like 'lose my patient' to 'lose my patience'.

Exemplo: I usually get bored and frustrated when I have to do repetitive tasks for a long time because it's human nature to lose interest in monotonous activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas better, use linking words, and correct grammar to improve clarity.

Exemplo: No, my job doesn't require much patience because as a student working part-time, my tasks change frequently, so I rarely have to do repetitive work that demands patience.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has some awkward phrasing and minor grammar errors. Try to use more natural expressions and correct phrases like 'improvements in my patient level' to 'I have become more patient'.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I have become more patient over the years. As a child, I used to ask my parents for toys or food immediately, but now I have learned to wait patiently in many situations.

× I would see most of the times, yes, I am a patient person, but sometimes there are some situations where I lose my patience and I need results really quickly.

✓ I would say most of the time, yes, I am a patient person, but sometimes there are some situations where I lose my patience and I need results really quickly.

The phrase 'I would see most of the times' is incorrect because 'see' is not the appropriate verb here. The correct expression is 'I would say most of the time' to indicate frequency or opinion. Also, 'most of the times' should be 'most of the time' as 'time' is uncountable in this context.

× It's not something specific that makes me impatience, it's just the situation or my mood when I need something right away.

✓ It's not something specific that makes me impatient, it's just the situation or my mood when I need something right away.

The word 'impatience' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the subject 'me'. The correct adjective form is 'impatient'. Using 'impatience' in this sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× And for example this morning I wanted my roommate to click my pictures and she was not doing it well so I lost my.

✓ For example, this morning I wanted my roommate to take my pictures, but she was not doing it well, so I lost my patience.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Click my pictures' is informal and better replaced with 'take my pictures'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'I lost my.' which is incomplete; it should be 'I lost my patience.' Adding conjunctions and punctuation improves clarity and correctness.

× I definitely get bored from the task, which I have to do repeatedly because it makes me irritated and frustrated sometimes and I lose my patient when I have to do any activity again and again.

✓ I definitely get bored with the task, which I have to do repeatedly because it makes me irritated and frustrated sometimes and I lose my patience when I have to do any activity again and again.

The correct preposition to use with 'bored' is 'with' not 'from'. Also, 'patient' is an adjective; the noun 'patience' should be used here. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy.

× I would say no to this question because I'm a student and I'm working part time so in my studies there is not much things which need patience and at my workplace if I talk there is the tasks which I have to do are different every minute I have to change the task so it's not repeated.

✓ I would say no to this question because I'm a student and I'm working part-time, so in my studies there are not many things which need patience, and at my workplace, if I talk, the tasks I have to do are different every minute; I have to change the task, so it's not repeated.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'things' is countable, so 'many' should be used. Also, 'there is' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. Adding commas and semicolons improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, definitely. There are a lot of improvements in my patient level.

✓ Yes, definitely. There are a lot of improvements in my patience level.

'Patient' is an adjective, but here the noun 'patience' is needed to refer to the quality or level of being patient. Using the correct noun form is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× When I was a kid, I wasn't very impatient. I wondered my parents to get me any toy or food right away.

✓ When I was a kid, I wasn't very patient. I wanted my parents to get me any toy or food right away.

The verb 'wondered' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'wanted'. Also, 'impatient' contradicts the intended meaning; 'patient' fits better. Correct verb choice and adjective usage are essential for clarity.