Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ ngữ tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh dùng từ 'uh' quá nhiều và nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn như 'patient' thay vì 'keen' trong ngữ cảnh này.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I try to stay calm in difficult situations. However, I do get a little frustrated when I have to wait for someone for more than 30 minutes. Also, multitasking can be quite challenging for me.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hạn chế lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do khiến bạn mất kiên nhẫn.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have to wait for someone for more than an hour because it makes me frustrated and stressed. Also, when I have many difficult assignments that are hard to complete, I tend to lose patience.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác hơn (ví dụ: 'patient' thay vì 'pension', 'deadly results' không phù hợp). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ liên kết để mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: At first, I feel tired and exhausted because the task takes a long time and it's hard to see immediate results. However, I try to stay motivated and persistent because I know patience is important to achieve good outcomes in the end.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện phát âm và chính tả từ vựng (ví dụ: 'pension' nên là 'patience'). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ liên kết để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên sửa câu cuối để ý nghĩa rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Well, I'm just a high school student, so my role doesn't require as much patience as a job in the workplace. However, I believe patience is still crucial at school, especially when learning difficult subjects or working on projects. It's important to stay calm and focused even when things get challenging.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'When I was growing up', 'paying patient' nên là 'being patient'). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ liên kết để mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was growing up, I used to get frustrated easily, but now I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting, especially at school or work. For example, I have learned that being patient helps me to perform better.

× I sometimes get a bit frustrated to wait for someone for more than 30 minutes.

✓ I sometimes get a bit frustrated waiting for someone for more than 30 minutes.

The verb 'get' is followed by the present participle form 'waiting' to express the action causing frustration. Using 'to wait' is incorrect here because 'get frustrated' is typically followed by a gerund (-ing form).

× because it make me frustrated and a bit of a stress or more than that if I have a lot of difficult assignments that that is so hard to show the answer and results I also feel.

✓ because it makes me frustrated and a bit stressed, or more than that if I have a lot of difficult assignments that are so hard to show the answers and results, I also feel.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Stress' should be 'stressed' as an adjective. 'Assignments' is plural, so 'that is' should be 'that are'. 'Answer' should be plural 'answers' to match 'results'.

× At first I feel tired and exhausted because task take a long time and it's hard to see my deadly results.

✓ At first I feel tired and exhausted because tasks take a long time and it's hard to see my daily results.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with plural verb 'take'. 'Deadly' is incorrect adjective here; 'daily' is the correct word to describe regular results.

× However, I try to stay motivated and persistent because I know patient is good.

✓ However, I try to stay motivated and persistent because I know patience is good.

'Patient' is an adjective; the noun form 'patience' is needed here to express the quality being referred to.

× It's a mistake came and focus even when things get challenging.

✓ It's a mistake to lose focus even when things get challenging.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses the infinitive 'to lose focus' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× When I growing up I used to get frustrated easily but now I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting, especially in school or at work.

✓ When I was growing up, I used to get frustrated easily but now I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting, especially in school or at work.

The phrase 'When I growing up' is missing the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past continuous tense 'was growing up'.

× For example, I have learned that paying patient help me to help me so properly.

✓ For example, I have learned that being patient helps me to do things properly.

'Paying patient' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'being patient'. Also, 'help me to help me so properly' is redundant and ungrammatical; it should be 'helps me to do things properly'.