PatiencePart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are you a patient person?

Candidato

No, I don't think so. I'm a very patient person. When I face many problems, I usually get quite worried and try to solve them very quickly. I don't have many patients to find lots of information about it.

Examinador

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Candidato

I feel impatient in several things. For example, one eye waits a long time or have to do something unproductive. I think then I will get very impatient.

Examinador

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Candidato

I think when I have to do something for a long time, first I feel very boring, so maybe I want to find lots of ways to reduce my stress. Secondly, maybe I feel very nervous and worried about myself because, you know, I think I don't have many patients to do this.

Examinador

Does your job require you to be patient?

Candidato

I'm a student, no I don't have job. However I believe with my study it's also how many patients obey 'cause you should to find lots of information information to solve this question.

Examinador

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Candidato

Umm, no, I said. I don't have many patients then when I was out because you know, now I usually feel very nervous, umm, especially when I meet a very difficult problem.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are you a patient person?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在自相矛盾的地方,先说自己不耐心,接着又说自己很有耐心,导致表达不清晰。此外,语法错误较多,如"patients"应为"patience"。建议回答时保持观点一致,注意词汇拼写和语法准确。

Exemplo: No, I am not a very patient person. When I face many problems, I usually get quite worried and try to solve them quickly because I don't have much patience to gather a lot of information.

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 回答中表达不清晰,"one eye waits a long time"可能是表达错误,且句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的表达,具体说明让你不耐烦的情境,并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time or when I have to do something unproductive, because it feels like a waste of time.

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如"very boring"应为"very bored","patients"应为"patience"。建议使用正确的词汇和时态,表达更自然流畅,并用连接词组织句子。

Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I first feel very bored, so I try to find ways to reduce my stress. Also, I sometimes feel nervous because I don't have much patience to keep doing it.

Does your job require you to be patient?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达错误较多,如"patients"应为"patience",句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题,注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

Exemplo: I am a student, so I don't have a job. However, studying also requires patience because I need to find a lot of information to solve problems.

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰,存在词汇错误,如"patients"应为"patience",且句子结构混乱。建议明确表达观点,使用正确词汇,并避免重复和口头语。

Exemplo: No, I am not more patient now than when I was a child. In fact, I often feel nervous, especially when I face very difficult problems.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× I don't have many patients to find lots of information about it.

I don't have much patience to find lots of information about it.

这里的错误是将不可数名词“patience”(耐心)误写为可数名词“patients”(病人)。应使用不可数名词形式。

Singular and plural issue

× I feel impatient in several things.

I feel impatient about several things.

“several things”是复数,搭配介词“about”更合适,且“in”用法不当。

Singular and plural issue

× For example, one eye waits a long time or have to do something unproductive.

For example, waiting a long time or having to do something unproductive.

“one eye waits”表达不正确,应使用动名词形式表达“等待很长时间”。

Singular and plural issue

× I think then I will get very impatient.

I think then I will become very impatient.

“get”虽可用,但“become”更正式且准确。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think when I have to do something for a long time, first I feel very boring, so maybe I want to find lots of ways to reduce my stress.

I think when I have to do something for a long time, first I feel very bored, so maybe I want to find lots of ways to reduce my stress.

“boring”是形容事物令人感到无聊,“bored”是形容人的感受,这里应使用“bored”。

Singular and plural issue

× I think I don't have many patients to do this.

I think I don't have much patience to do this.

同上,“patience”是不可数名词,不能用复数形式“patients”。

Singular and plural issue

× I'm a student, no I don't have job.

I'm a student, no I don't have a job.

“job”是可数名词,单数时前面需要冠词“a”。

Singular and plural issue

× However I believe with my study it's also how many patients obey 'cause you should to find lots of information information to solve this question.

However, I believe with my study it also requires a lot of patience because you should find lots of information to solve this question.

“patients”应为“patience”,且句子结构混乱,需调整表达。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× However I believe with my study it's also how many patients obey 'cause you should to find lots of information information to solve this question.

However, I believe with my study it also requires a lot of patience because you should find lots of information to solve this question.

“believe with my study”表达不当,应改为“believe that my study requires”。

Singular and plural issue

× I don't have many patients then when I was out because you know, now I usually feel very nervous, umm, especially when I meet a very difficult problem.

I didn't have much patience when I was young because you know, now I usually feel very nervous, umm, especially when I meet a very difficult problem.

“patients”应为“patience”,且“when I was out”应为“when I was young”。

Vocabulário

BoringTedious
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
WorriedAnxious
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