Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and directly linked to the question. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Add one brief supporting detail about how your studies helped you develop patience, using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. Because I study psychology, I have learned to be more empathetic and to listen carefully to others, which helps me stay calm in difficult conversations.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly: identify specific triggers of impatience. Avoid repeating previous points; instead give a clear example of a situation that makes you impatient and use linking words to explain why.

Exemplo: I become impatient when people are consistently late because it wastes other people's time. For example, when a colleague arrives late to meetings without warning, I feel frustrated because it disrupts the schedule and productivity.

Sugestão: This answer is mostly clear but improve fluency by using correct articles and plural/singular forms, and by linking ideas smoothly. Keep it concise and give one specific strategy you use to stay focused.

Exemplo: When I work on a task for a long time, I become reflective and reassess my approach. If I find it inefficient, I change my method or take a short break to recharge and regain concentration.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'part-time job', 'scent', 'preferences'). Provide one specific example of a customer interaction and use linking words to clarify steps you take.

Exemplo: Yes. I worked a part-time job in a perfume shop where customers often struggled to choose a scent. I had to be patient, ask about their preferences, offer samples, and recommend similar options until they were satisfied.

Sugestão: Start with a clear comparison sentence and correct grammar (use 'than', avoid filler phrases like 'don't worry'). Give one concise reason and a specific example of a situation that shows improvement.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For instance, working in a perfume shop and talking with friends taught me to stay calm during difficult customer interactions, so I no longer get frustrated easily.

× Yeah, I consider myself a patient person with others because I study in psychology and has told that told me to be more empathetic and to listen carefully to what others say.

✓ Yeah, I consider myself a patient person with others because I study psychology and have been told that it taught me to be more empathetic and to listen carefully to what others say.

The sentence uses incorrect verb form and pronoun references. 'Study in psychology' should be 'study psychology' (preposition unnecessary). 'Has told that told me' is incorrect; use 'have been told' or rephrase. Also clarify the subject: 'it taught me' refers to studying psychology. Suggestion: simplify to 'I study psychology and have been told that it taught me to be more empathetic.'

× As I mentioned, studying psychology trained me to be more patient because I learned to listen carefully and understand people's perspectives. On the other hand, I was naturally empathetic, so I often give other times to explain themselves.

✓ As I mentioned, studying psychology has trained me to be more patient because I have learned to listen carefully and understand people's perspectives. On the other hand, I was naturally empathetic, so I often give others time to explain themselves.

Tense inconsistency: 'trained me' and 'learned' should use present perfect to link past study to current state ('has trained', 'have learned'). 'Give other times' is incorrect: use pronoun 'others' and singular 'time'. Suggestion: use present perfect for continuing effects and correct pronoun and noun forms.

× When I do something for a long time, I start to feel reflective and question the purpose of the text. I think about whether my approach is efficient. If not, I consider changing my method or taking short break to regain concentration.

✓ When I do something for a long time, I start to feel reflective and question the purpose of the task. I think about whether my approach is efficient. If not, I consider changing my method or taking a short break to regain concentration.

Word choice and article error: 'purpose of the text' likely intended 'purpose of the task'. 'Taking short break' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestions: ensure correct vocabulary and include articles before singular nouns.

× Yes, I used to work part time job in a perfume shop and customers often found it difficult to choose ascent I had.

✓ Yes, I used to work a part-time job in a perfume shop and customers often found it difficult to choose the scent I had.

Missing articles and hyphenation: 'part time job' should be 'a part-time job'. Spelling error 'ascent' should be 'scent'. Also word order: 'choose the scent I had' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use articles before singular nouns and check spelling.

× We have to be patient and speak to them professionally, asking about their prefer preference and offering examples until they were happy with the choice.

✓ We had to be patient and speak to them professionally, asking about their preferred preferences and offering samples until they were happy with the choice.

Tense agreement: earlier clause 'I used to work' sets past context, so use past 'had to' rather than 'have to'. 'Prefer preference' is incorrect; use 'preferred preferences' or better 'preferences' or 'preferred option'. 'Offering examples' is better as 'offering samples' in a shop context. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense and use correct noun forms.

× Yeah don't worry, more patient now then I was when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, don't worry, I'm more patient now than I was when I was a child.

Missing subject and auxiliary verb: sentence lacks 'I am'. Comparative conjunction 'then' is incorrect; use 'than'. Also punctuation: add comma and contraction apostrophe. Suggestion: include subject and correct comparative word.

× I used to go F frustrated easily but working in a perfume shop and spending with some friends taught me how to stay calm with difficult situations so I've learned to be much more patient.

✓ I used to get frustrated easily, but working in a perfume shop and spending time with some friends taught me how to stay calm in difficult situations, so I've learned to be much more patient.

Word choice and fragments: 'go F frustrated' is incorrect; use 'get frustrated'. 'Spending with some friends' needs object 'time'. Use 'in difficult situations' rather than 'with'. Comma needed before 'so'. Suggestion: choose correct verbs and include necessary nouns and prepositions; keep tense consistency.