Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai như 'I can studying' nên là 'I can study'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý rõ ràng, tự nhiên và ngắn gọn hơn.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I can study and play video games with my friends. It helps me relax and improves my mood throughout the day.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ đúng ngữ cảnh, ví dụ 'Writing a board matches' không phù hợp với câu hỏi. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Đồng thời, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep my house clean and are easy to use.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'much is all the machines' không đúng, nên nói 'most of the machines'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions because most machines in my house have many functions. So, I need to understand them before using the machines.

Sugestão: Bạn cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ đúng ngữ cảnh, ví dụ 'risk instruction' không phù hợp, nên là 'read the instructions'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

Exemplo: Yes, of course. Reading the instructions is important because it helps you understand all the functions of the machine. Otherwise, the machine might be wasted if you don't know how to use it properly.

× I think I will like my computer because I can studying or playing some video game with my friends.

✓ I think I will like my computer because I can study or play some video games with my friends.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'video game' should be plural 'video games' to match the context.

× It can help me lay my head out and I can feel a good mood from all day.

✓ It can help me relax and I can feel good all day.

The phrase 'lay my head out' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'relax'. Also, 'feel a good mood from all day' is awkward; 'feel good all day' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Writing a board matches is is important because it can let my house always clean and I I think it's easier can easy easy to use.

✓ Washing machines are important because they can keep my house always clean and I think they are easy to use.

'Writing a board matches' is incorrect; likely meant 'washing machines'. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'washing machines'. The phrase 'can easy easy to use' is incorrect; correct form is 'are easy to use'.

× Well, I always read the instructions because much is all the machines in my house have a lot of several function.

✓ Well, I always read the instructions because all the machines in my house have several functions.

'Much is all the machines' is incorrect; 'all the machines' is correct. 'A lot of several function' is redundant; 'several functions' is appropriate.

× So I need to read all the instruction before using this.

✓ So I need to read all the instructions before using them.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps. 'This' should be 'them' to refer back to the plural 'instructions'.

× Yeah, yeah. Yes, of course, when you are the risk instruction, you can know all the function of this machine.

✓ Yes, of course, when you read the instructions, you can know all the functions of this machine.

'Are the risk instruction' is incorrect; likely meant 'read the instructions'. 'Function' should be plural 'functions'.

× So I think this machine can get into a waste if you cannot own, cannot know the.

✓ So I think this machine can become a waste if you do not know how to use it.

The phrase 'can get into a waste' is incorrect; 'become a waste' is correct. 'Cannot own, cannot know the' is unclear; corrected to 'do not know how to use it' for clarity.