Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use plural form 'washing machines' when speaking generally.

Exemplo: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because I wash my clothes every day. Since I live in a mountainous area where there isn't much sunshine, the washing machine helps me dry clothes efficiently indoors.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and improve sentence structure. Also, use plural forms and avoid awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because my house is quite large. Therefore, these machines make it much easier and faster for me to clean my home.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Use proper expressions like 'the first time' and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: I always read the instructions the first time I use a machine because I'm unfamiliar with it. However, after the second time, I usually don't read them again.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys the idea but is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve sentence structure. Also, use plural forms and correct verb agreement.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe it's important to read the instructions the first time because we are unfamiliar with the machine. Reading them helps us understand how the machine works and use it safely.

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine because I like washing my clothes everyday and unfortunately I live in mountain area and there is no sun every day.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because I like washing my clothes every day and unfortunately I live in a mountain area and there is no sun every day.

The noun 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine. 'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day. 'Mountain area' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. Articles are important for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think washing machine and sweeping machine are important because my house is too big that's why I really need it to make me easier clean my home.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because my house is too big; that's why I really need them to make it easier for me to clean my home.

When referring to more than one item, plural forms 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' should be used. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural subject. The phrase 'make me easier clean' is incorrect; it should be 'make it easier for me to clean' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× At the first time, of course I will read the instruction because I never use it before and that's why I need to read the instruction.

✓ The first time, of course I will read the instructions because I have never used it before and that's why I need to read the instructions.

The phrase 'At the first time' is incorrect; it should be 'The first time'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it usually refers to multiple steps or guidelines. The verb tense 'never use' should be present perfect 'have never used' to indicate an experience up to now.

× But if I use for twice or second time, I will not read it again.

✓ But if I use it for the second time, I will not read it again.

The phrase 'use for twice or second time' is incorrect. It should be 'use it for the second time'. 'Twice' is an adverb and does not fit well here. Including the object 'it' is necessary for clarity.

× I think it's important to read instruction at the first time because we never know about that machine and we don't know about the instruction, and I think it will be better if we read it first and understand how that machine work.

✓ I think it's important to read the instructions the first time because we never know about that machine and we don't know about the instructions, and I think it will be better if we read them first and understand how that machine works.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. 'At the first time' should be 'the first time'. 'Instruction' should be plural again in 'we don't know about the instructions'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'instructions'. The verb 'work' should be 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'machine'.