Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้นและหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน เช่น การใช้คำว่า "to make me saving" ที่ไม่ถูกต้อง ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น "It saves me a lot of time" และควรแบ่งประโยคให้กระชับไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time doing laundry. This is very convenient, especially since I am a working woman and have limited free time on weekends.

Sugestão: คำตอบควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น "can be make me safe a lot of time" ควรแก้เป็น "can save me a lot of time" และควรอธิบายเหตุผลให้ชัดเจนและสมเหตุสมผล พร้อมใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

Exemplo: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For example, on weekends, I can focus on other activities like shopping or relaxing instead of doing housework.

Sugestão: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น "before you send a machine strictly" ไม่มีความหมายที่ชัดเจน ควรแก้เป็น "before using a machine carefully" และควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ

Exemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions carefully before using a machine to prevent any accidents in the future if I use it incorrectly.

Sugestão: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และถูกต้อง เช่น "before you seeing any machine" ควรแก้เป็น "before using any machine" และควรเชื่อมประโยคด้วย linking words เพื่อความสมเหตุสมผลและความลื่นไหล

Exemplo: Yes, it is important to read the instructions before using any machine because it helps me avoid accidents and ensures that I use the machine correctly and safely.

× My favorite machine in my home is a laundry machine to make me saving a lot of time for to do laundry and off weekend and very convenient for working woman like me.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is a laundry machine because it saves me a lot of time doing laundry and gives me weekends off. It is very convenient for working women like me.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'working woman' which should be 'working women' to match the plural context. Also, the phrase 'to make me saving' is incorrect; it should be 'because it saves me' to express purpose and effect correctly.

× Yes, because washing machine can be make me safe a lot of time to doing laundry especially on my weekend.

✓ Yes, because the washing machine can save me a lot of time doing laundry, especially on my weekends.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'be' or 'make'. The phrase 'can be make me safe' is incorrect; it should be 'can save me'. Also, 'to doing' should be 'doing' after 'save me a lot of time'.

× I usually read instruction before you send a machine strictly to prevent any accident occur in the future if we use the wrong instruction.

✓ I usually read the instructions carefully before using a machine to prevent any accidents from occurring in the future if we use the wrong instructions.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used instead of 'I' or a general subject. Also, 'send a machine' is incorrect; it should be 'using a machine'. The sentence structure is corrected to reflect proper pronoun use and clarity.

× Yes, important to read instruction before you seeing any machine.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions before using any machine.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used; it should be an impersonal subject 'it is'. Also, 'seeing any machine' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'using any machine'.

× Make me avoid accident and ensure that use that machine correct and safety.

✓ It helps me avoid accidents and ensures that I use the machine correctly and safely.

The sentence lacks a subject and uses incorrect adjective and adverb forms. 'Correct' should be 'correctly' and 'safety' should be 'safely' to modify the verbs properly. Also, the sentence needs a subject like 'It' to be complete.