Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but lacks a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. Try to start with a direct response, then add supporting details. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the microwave oven because it helps me heat food quickly and saves time. I don't often do chores like cleaning, so I don't use other machines much.

Sugestão: Your answer has a clear opinion but the sentence structure is a bit awkward and some grammar errors affect clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about why these machines are important.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce physical effort. For example, washing clothes by hand can be tiring, but machines make the task easier and more efficient.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats 'maybe' several times, which reduces confidence and clarity. Try to be more certain and use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid injuries. For instance, some machines have specific safety precautions that must be followed.

Sugestão: Your answer shows understanding but has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the consequences of not reading instructions. Keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because they explain how to use the machine correctly. If you misuse a machine, it can cause injuries or damage, so following the rules ensures safety.

× Yes, I think they are really important is because now we need to use technology wisely.

✓ Yes, I think they are really important because now we need to use technology wisely.

The phrase 'important is because' is incorrect. The modal verb 'is' is unnecessary here and should be removed to form a correct sentence. The correct structure is 'important because'. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If you wash or wipe the floor by using hand, it may take a lot of effort and it is not user friendly.

✓ If you wash or wipe the floor by using your hand, it may take a lot of effort and it is not user friendly.

The preposition 'by' is correctly used, but the noun 'hand' needs a possessive pronoun 'your' to specify whose hand is used. Without 'your', the sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'your' clarifies the meaning.

× Maybe there are some rules we need to follow to avoid maybe harming yourself.

✓ Maybe there are some rules we need to follow to avoid maybe harming yourself.

The pronoun 'yourself' is incorrect here because the subject is 'we', which is first person plural, but 'yourself' is second person singular reflexive pronoun. It should be 'ourselves' to match the subject. However, since the instruction says only correct mistakes that meet the problem types, and 'Incorrect use of pronouns' is included, correction is needed. So the corrected sentence should be: 'Maybe there are some rules we need to follow to avoid maybe harming ourselves.'

× Maybe there are some rules we need to follow to avoid maybe harming yourself.

✓ Maybe there are some rules we need to follow to avoid maybe harming ourselves.

The reflexive pronoun 'yourself' does not agree with the subject 'we'. The correct reflexive pronoun for 'we' is 'ourselves'. Using 'ourselves' ensures subject-pronoun agreement and grammatical correctness.

× Some instruction included how you use it.

✓ Some instructions include how you use it.

The noun 'instruction' is uncountable in this context and should be pluralized as 'instructions' to refer to multiple guidelines. Also, the verb tense should be present simple 'include' to match the general truth. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and noun usage.

× If you didn't use it wisely or misuse it, you may get injury or maybe other disadvantages.

✓ If you don't use it wisely or misuse it, you may get injured or maybe other disadvantages.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't use' with modal 'may', which is inconsistent. Changing 'didn't use' to present tense 'don't use' aligns with the modal verb 'may'. Also, 'get injury' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get injured'. This correction addresses tense consistency and correct verb usage.

× If you didn't use it wisely or misuse it, you may get injury or maybe other disadvantages.

✓ If you don't use it wisely or misuse it, you may get injured or maybe other disadvantages.

The verb tense should be consistent; 'didn't use' is past tense, but 'may' indicates present/future possibility. Using 'don't use' matches the modal verb. Also, 'get injury' is incorrect; the correct form is 'get injured' to indicate receiving an injury.