Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Жауабыңызды толық әрі нақты етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, тақырыптық сөйлемнен кейін, себептер мен артықшылықтарды нақты және түсінікті түрде айтыңыз. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін 'because', 'so', 'therefore' сияқты сөздерді қолданыңыз.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Instead of washing dishes by hand, I can simply load them into the machine and let it do the work. This makes cleaning up after meals much easier and more efficient.

Sugestão: Жауабыңызды нақты және толық етіп беріңіз. Мысалы, әрбір машинаның маңыздылығын түсіндіріп, нақты мысалдар келтіріңіз. Байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданып, сөйлемдер арасындағы логиканы жақсартыңыз.

Exemplo: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help people save time and effort. For example, if someone dislikes washing clothes, a washing machine makes the task easier. Similarly, a sweeping machine can help keep the house clean without much physical work.

Sugestão: Жауабыңызды түсінікті және грамматикалық тұрғыдан дұрыс етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, себептерді нақтылап, сөйлемдерді байланыстырыңыз. Қиындықтар туралы айтқанда, оларды нақты және дұрыс баяндаңыз.

Exemplo: I usually do not read the instructions because I find them confusing. Instead, I watch videos on YouTube where people explain how to use the machine. I prefer this method because I like listening to explanations rather than reading.

Sugestão: Жауабыңызды нақты және грамматикалық тұрғыдан дұрыс етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, жағдайға байланысты нұсқаулықты оқу маңыздылығын түсіндіріп, нақты мысалдар келтіріңіз. Байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданыңыз.

Exemplo: I think it is important to read instructions depending on the situation. For example, when using dangerous machines, reading the instructions carefully can prevent accidents. Therefore, following the guidelines ensures safety and proper use.

× My favorite machine in the home.

✓ My favorite machine in the home is the dishwasher.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. To correct it, add a verb and complete the thought. 'Dishwasher' is the correct term instead of 'dishes machine'.

× It is a dishes machine because.

✓ It is a dishwasher because it gives me an opportunity not to wash some dishes.

The phrase 'a dishes machine' is incorrect; 'dishwasher' is the proper noun. Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper quantifiers and verb forms.

× It gave me a opportunity to don't wash some dishes which I got from from the eating and it's better.

✓ It gives me an opportunity not to wash some dishes after eating, and it's better.

'Gave' should be 'gives' to match present tense. 'A opportunity' should be 'an opportunity' due to vowel sound. 'To don't wash' is incorrect; use 'not to wash'. The phrase 'which I got from from the eating' is awkward; 'after eating' is clearer.

× So for instance if you don't like to wash, washing machine will be important to you and if you don't like to sweep in the house so super machine will be better choice too.

✓ For instance, if you don't like to wash, a washing machine will be important to you, and if you don't like to sweep the house, a sweeping machine will be a better choice too.

Missing articles 'a' before 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine'. 'Super machine' is incorrect; likely meant 'sweeping machine'. Also, 'in the house' is better as 'the house'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× When I read the instructions I just don't not understand something.

✓ When I read the instructions, I just don't understand something.

Double negation 'don't not' is incorrect. Use 'don't' or 'do not' alone. Also, a comma after the introductory clause improves readability.

× So because of that I just watching some guys from YouTube and also it is more reliable for me to listen it because I like audio.

✓ Because of that, I just watch some people on YouTube, and it is more reliable for me to listen because I like audio.

'Just watching' should be 'just watch' to match tense. 'Guys from YouTube' is better as 'people on YouTube'. 'Listen it' is incorrect; 'listen' does not take an object here. Added commas for clarity.

× It depends on which scene do you using because if you use some of dangerous things you need to read instruction properly because if you don't do it, it will be have a bad accidents for you.

✓ It depends on the situation you are in because if you use dangerous things, you need to read the instructions properly. If you don't, it can cause bad accidents for you.

The original sentence has incorrect word order ('which scene do you using'), missing articles ('read instruction'), and awkward phrasing ('it will be have a bad accidents'). The correction improves sentence structure, verb forms, and article usage for clarity.