Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复用词，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达，并使用更连贯的句子结构。

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the computer because it is very useful in my daily life. I can surf the Internet, play video games, and search for information on it.

Sugestão: 回答中存在主谓不一致和用词不当的问题，且表达较为简单。建议注意主语和动词的一致性，使用更准确的词汇，并丰富细节。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines can do a lot of household chores, which helps people save time and reduce their workload.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且有语法错误，句子结构混乱。建议完整表达观点，避免口语缩写，使用连贯的句子，并注意语法正确。

Exemplo: Of course, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am afraid of using it incorrectly and causing damage. Instructions also help me understand the machine better.

Sugestão: 回答较为完整，但表达稍显简单。建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they help me understand the machines better, which allows me to use all their functions effectively.

× I can surf the Internet, play the video, video game and searching and search the knowledge on it.

✓ I can surf the Internet, play videos, play video games, and search for knowledge on it.

动词并列时，应该保持形式一致。这里play和search应该用动词原形，不能用-ing形式。并且video和video game应使用复数形式。建议保持动词并列结构的一致性。

× Yes, definitely, because it can do many housework which can help people save their time and release their burden.

✓ Yes, definitely, because they can do many housework tasks which can help people save their time and reduce their burden.

housework是不可数名词，不能用many修饰，应该用tasks等可数名词。代词it指代复数的washing machines and sweeping machines，应使用they。

× I can surf the Internet, play the video, video game and searching and search the knowledge on it.

✓ I can surf the Internet, play videos, play video games, and search for knowledge on it.

search后面搭配介词for，表示“寻找”。

× Yes, definitely, because it can do many housework which can help people save their time and release their burden.

✓ Yes, definitely, because they can do many housework tasks which can help people save their time and reduce their burden.

前文提到的washing machines and sweeping machines是复数，代词应使用they而非it。

× ...making it broken, so I always read the instructions 1st and also I think instructions can help me have a deeper understanding of the machine and.

✓ ...making it broken, so I always read the instructions first, and I also think instructions can help me have a deeper understanding of the machine.

1st应写为first，and后面不应断句，且句子不完整，应补充完整。

× ...making it broken, so I always read the instructions 1st and also I think instructions can help me have a deeper understanding of the machine and.

✓ ...making it broken, so I always read the instructions first, and I also think instructions can help me have a deeper understanding of the machine.

句子末尾不完整，缺少内容，导致句子结构错误，应补全句子。

× Yes, I think so because the instructions can help me have a deeper understanding of the machines which could make me fully use their functions.

✓ Yes, I think so because the instructions can help me have a deeper understanding of the machines which could help me fully use their functions.

fully use是固定搭配，不能用make sb. do sth.结构，应该用help sb. do sth.。