Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to improve your sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'clothes', you can say 'it cleans them efficiently'.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. We just need to put our clothes in, and it cleans them efficiently, which is very convenient.

Sugestão: Focus on using clearer vocabulary and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, explain why these machines save time and how that benefits people.

Exemplo: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because nowadays, people are very busy with work and have little free time. Therefore, these machines help by saving time and making household chores easier.

Sugestão: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain the reason clearly and concisely.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me operate it more easily and avoid making mistakes.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be more specific about the benefits of reading instructions.

Exemplo: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they help us operate the machine correctly and troubleshoot problems easily, which prevents mistakes.

× At my home, my favorite machine is washing machine because I think it's a save over a lot of time and efforts and it is very convenient.

✓ At my home, my favorite machine is the washing machine because I think it saves a lot of time and effort and it is very convenient.

The phrase 'a save over a lot of time and efforts' is incorrect. 'Save' should be a verb here, so 'it saves' is correct. Also, 'efforts' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'effort' is preferred. Additionally, 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine in the home.

× At my home, my favorite machine is washing machine because I think it's a save over a lot of time and efforts and it is very convenient.

✓ At my home, my favorite machine is the washing machine because I think it saves a lot of time and effort and it is very convenient.

When referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' is required before 'washing machine'. Omitting it makes the sentence sound unnatural.

× We have to just put our clothes and it can clean our clothes for us.

✓ We just have to put our clothes in, and it can clean them for us.

The sentence is missing a preposition after 'put our clothes' (e.g., 'in'). Also, repeating 'our clothes' is redundant; using 'them' is more natural. Adding a comma improves clarity.

× Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important for us because in this modern era, PE people uh, usually don't have lesson time to do these kind of things.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important for us because in this modern era, people usually don't have enough time to do these kinds of things.

'PE people' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; it should be 'people'. 'Lesson time' is not appropriate here; 'enough time' fits better. Also, 'these kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' to agree in number.

× They are busy in their works, so it can help them to do their work easily rather than doing other small tasks.

✓ They are busy with their work, so these machines can help them do their work more easily rather than doing other small tasks.

'Works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here. 'Busy in' should be 'busy with'. Also, 'it' is ambiguous; 'these machines' clarifies the subject. 'Help them to do' can be simplified to 'help them do'. Adding 'more' before 'easily' improves the comparative sense.

× Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it help us to operate that machine in easier way so that we can't, uh, do any mistakes.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it helps us to operate that machine in an easier way so that we don't make any mistakes.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'In easier way' needs the article 'an'. 'Can't do any mistakes' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'don't make any mistakes'.

× Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it help us to operate that machine in easier way so that we can't, uh, do any mistakes.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it helps us to operate that machine in an easier way so that we don't make any mistakes.

The phrase 'in easier way' requires the indefinite article 'an' before 'easier way' to be grammatically correct.

× Yeah, it's quite important to read the instructions because because it can help us to solve the things easily if there is something wrong or it can also help us to operate the machine in a right way rather than making the mistakes.

✓ Yeah, it's quite important to read the instructions because it can help us solve problems easily if something goes wrong, or it can also help us operate the machine in the right way rather than making mistakes.

'Solve the things' is vague; 'solve problems' is clearer. 'If there is something wrong' should be 'if something goes wrong'. 'In a right way' should be 'in the right way' because 'right way' is a specific concept requiring the definite article. 'Making the mistakes' should be 'making mistakes' without 'the'.