Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Since I have a busy schedule, it helps me wash clothes quickly and efficiently.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and provide specific reasons to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are important because they make household chores faster. Since most people have busy lives, these machines help save time and effort.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repeating words and phrases. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide clear reasons for your habits.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely, especially when the product is new to me.

Sugestão: Avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and use more precise vocabulary. Connect your ideas smoothly with linking words and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: In my opinion, reading instructions is important because it ensures our safety and helps us use machines correctly.

× According to my opinion, the washing machine and sweeping machine machines are very important umm because these machines makes life very easy and we can finish our cleaning in a short time because nowadays everybody have a busy schedule so.

✓ According to my opinion, the washing machine and sweeping machines are very important umm because these machines make life very easy and we can finish our cleaning in a short time because nowadays everybody has a busy schedule so.

The word 'machines' was repeated unnecessarily as 'machine machines'. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'machines'. Additionally, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'everybody'. These are singular and plural agreement issues.

× Sometimes we don't know about about the product like how to use it because sometimes some things are very new for us, so that's why we should read the instruction.

✓ Sometimes we don't know about the product, like how to use it, because sometimes some things are very new for us, so that's why we should read the instructions.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'about about' is a repetition error. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Definitely I read the instruction before using any machine because it is very important to read.

✓ Definitely I read the instructions before using any machine because it is very important to read.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Nowadays everybody have a busy schedule so.

✓ Nowadays everybody has a busy schedule so.

The subject 'everybody' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a singular and plural issue.