Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and detailed. Instead of saying "reduces the stress which is physical," try to say "reduces physical effort" or "makes chores easier." Also, add a bit more detail about why you like the washing machine to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of physical effort. It quickly cleans my clothes, which helps me save time and energy for other activities.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct plural forms and clearer sentence structures. Use linking words like "because" or "therefore" to connect ideas logically. Also, be more specific about why these machines are important.

Exemplo: Absolutely, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they reduce physical effort. As people get older, their strength decreases, so these machines help them maintain cleanliness easily and safely.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating the word "washing machine" too often. Also, clarify your experience with assembling the machine to make it more coherent. Use linking words like "for example" or "recently" appropriately.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. For example, when we recently bought a new washing machine, I carefully read the user manual and successfully assembled it myself.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer examples. Instead of "raise a huge loss," say "cause significant damage." Also, use linking words like "because" and "for example" correctly to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions because small mistakes can cause serious damage or even injuries. For example, if we don't follow the safety guidelines when assembling an electronic appliance, it could be dangerous.

× Absolutely, washing machine and sweeping mission plays a vital role in our household appliances.

✓ Absolutely, washing machines and sweeping machines play a vital role in our household appliances.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular forms 'washing machine' and 'sweeping mission' instead of plural 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' to refer to multiple appliances. Also, 'mission' is a typo and should be 'machine'. The verb 'plays' should be 'play' to agree with the plural subject.

× Moreover as people growing their age will also grow so they there was a reduce in their strengths.

✓ Moreover, as people grow older, their strength reduces.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'People growing their age will also grow' is incorrect; it should be 'people grow older'. 'There was a reduce' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'their strength reduces' to express a present general truth.

× To overcome this we use washing machines and sweeping machines.

✓ To overcome this, we use washing machines and sweeping machines.

This sentence is correct in terms of singular/plural usage but missing a comma after the introductory phrase 'To overcome this'. Adding the comma improves clarity.

× The machine Yes, I definitely read the instructions while using a washing machine.

✓ Yes, I definitely read the instructions while using a washing machine.

The phrase 'The machine' at the beginning is unnecessary and disrupts sentence structure. Removing it makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× Moreover, recently we bought a washing machine.

✓ Moreover, we recently bought a washing machine.

The adverb 'recently' is better placed after the subject 'we' for natural English word order.

× I read the user manual and tried to fix the parts of the washing machine and I assembled it correctly so it runs successfully.

✓ I read the user manual, tried to fix the parts of the washing machine, and assembled it correctly so it runs successfully.

The sentence is a run-on and needs commas to separate the actions. Also, 'runs successfully' is correct as the machine is currently running after assembly.

× Yes, it is important to read the instructions because if we make small mistakes, it could raise a huge loss or physical damage and may cause injuries too.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions because if we make small mistakes, they could cause huge loss or physical damage and may cause injuries too.

The modal verb 'could' is correctly used, but 'raise a huge loss' is incorrect collocation. The verb 'cause' is appropriate with 'loss' and 'damage'. Also, 'they' refers to 'small mistakes' and should be used instead of 'it'.

× For example, without reading the safety instructions, we are trying to assemble the parts of a electronic appliance.

✓ For example, without reading the safety instructions, we try to assemble the parts of an electronic appliance.

The article 'a' before 'electronic' is incorrect; it should be 'an' because 'electronic' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'are trying' is present continuous which is less appropriate here; simple present 'try' fits better for general statements.