Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，且内容重复。建议回答时先明确表达喜欢的机器是什么，然后简洁说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the oven because I enjoy baking cakes. It helps me create delicious desserts, and I also love eating them.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，使用连词连接观点和理由，注意语法和句子完整性。

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help reduce the amount of housework. For example, my mother feels more relaxed since these machines do most of the cleaning.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但表达中有小错误和不够正式的用词。建议避免口语化表达，保持正式和简洁。

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I want to make sure I operate it correctly and safely.

Sugestão: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并用连词连接观点和理由。

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps users understand how to operate the machine properly and use its different functions.

× I left the orphans in my home best because I love to do some make some lovely cakes and it's how it's helped me a lot to make these beautiful things and also I love to eat cakes too.

✓ I like the oven in my home best because I love to make some lovely cakes and it has helped me a lot to make these beautiful things and also I love to eat cakes too.

原句中“left the orphans”应为“I like the oven”，这是单复数和词汇错误。应使用单数名词“oven”表示家用机器。动词“make”前不需要“do”，且“it's how it's helped”结构不正确，应改为“it has helped”。建议注意单复数和词汇的正确使用。

× So it not only help me to cook and also.

✓ So it not only helps me to cook but also...

主语是单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“helps”。句子不完整，建议补充完整表达。

× Yes, I think yes I think so. So umm, I have both. We have both these two machines in our family and actually this make my mother more relax in home because umm, this means she don't need to do the housework show.

✓ Yes, I think so. We have both these two machines in our family and actually these make my mother more relaxed at home because this means she doesn't need to do the housework.

“this make”应为“these make”，主谓一致错误。动词“make”后应使用形容词“relaxed”而非动词原形“relax”。“she don't”应为“she doesn't”，主谓一致。介词“in home”应为“at home”。“housework show”应为“housework”，多余单词应删除。

× Of course, I read the instruction before using the machine because I am not really sure how to switch it all on or off and how to use it.

✓ Of course, I read the instructions before using the machine because I am not really sure how to switch it all on or off and how to use it.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书。单数形式不符合语境。

× Sometimes I think I am a fossil in this 21st central, although I'm only 18 years old.

✓ Sometimes I think I am a fossil in this 21st century, although I'm only 18 years old.

“central”应为“century”，词汇错误。

× Yes, I think so because read the instruction is good for someone who want to use the machine and he he can know how the machine operate and how can he use it in different.

✓ Yes, I think so because reading the instructions is good for someone who wants to use the machine and he can know how the machine operates and how he can use it differently.

“read the instruction”应改为动名词形式“reading the instructions”，且“instruction”应为复数。主语“someone”后动词应为“wants”。“machine operate”应为“machine operates”，主谓一致。句子末尾“how can he use it in different”语序错误且“different”应为副词“differently”。