Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使表达更流畅自然。

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is a robot vacuum cleaner. I bought it a year ago, and it has helped me a lot because I don't need to spend time vacuuming every day. I can just relax on the sofa while it cleans the floor for me.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I think both washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important. Without them, I would have to wash clothes by hand and clean the floor myself, which would take a lot of time and make me very tired.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够完整，存在语法错误。建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性，使表达更准确。

Exemplo: Yes, of course. I think reading the instructions is essential to avoid damaging the machines and to understand how to use them properly. So, every time I buy a new machine, I read the instructions carefully the first time.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免重复词汇，使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine. This helps people avoid damaging the machines due to lack of knowledge.

× I boasted about one years one year ago and I find it helped me a lot because I don't have to spend time vacuum every day with it, I can just sit on my sofa and that it do for me.

✓ I bought one one year ago and I find it helped me a lot because I don't have to spend time vacuuming every day with it, I can just sit on my sofa and it does that for me.

这里的动词时态错误，'boasted'（吹嘘）应为'bought'（买），符合语境。'vacuum'作为动词时应使用动名词形式'vacuuming'。'that it do'应改为'it does that'，主谓一致问题。建议注意动词的正确形式和主谓一致。

× Yes, I think washing machine is sweep. Sweeping machine are important as well.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important as well.

这里单复数使用错误，'washing machine'应为复数'washing machines'，'sweeping machine are'应为'sweeping machines are'，保持主语和谓语的一致性。建议注意名词的单复数形式。

× Without them you I need to wash clothes by my hands and I need to vacuum my floor by myself.

✓ Without them, I need to wash clothes by hand and vacuum my floor by myself.

句中出现了多余的代词'you'，应删除。'by my hands'应为'by hand'，这是固定搭配。建议注意代词的正确使用和固定表达。

× I don't have to spend time vacuum every day with it, I can just sit on my sofa and that it do for me.

✓ I don't have to spend time vacuuming every day with it, I can just sit on my sofa and it does that for me.

动词'spend'后应接动名词形式，故'vacuum'应改为'vacuuming'。另外，'that it do'语序错误，应为'it does that'。建议注意动词后接动名词和主谓语序。

× I think reading instructions is a must to avoid damaging the machines or not understand how to use it.

✓ I think reading instructions is a must to avoid damaging the machines or not understanding how to use them.

'not understand'应改为动名词形式'not understanding'，'use it'中的'it'应改为复数'them'，与前文'machines'一致。建议注意动词形式和代词的一致性。

× So every time I buy a machine, I read instruction there the first time to make sure that.

✓ So every time I buy a machine, I read the instructions there the first time to make sure of that.

'read instruction'应为复数形式'the instructions'，且缺少定冠词'the'。'make sure that'后应加介词'of'。建议注意冠词和介词的正确使用。

× Yes, I think it's very important to read the instruction before using them.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions before using them.

'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'，因为通常指说明书的多条内容。建议注意可数名词的单复数形式。

× By this way people can avoid the chance to damage those machines with with lack of knowledge besides.

✓ In this way, people can avoid the chance of damaging those machines due to lack of knowledge.

'By this way'应改为惯用表达'In this way'。'with with'重复，应删去一个。'chance to damage'应为'chance of damaging'。'besides'位置不当且多余，应删除。建议注意连词和介词短语的正确搭配。